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Published: 2007-08-19 21:00:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 3344; Favourites: 146; Downloads: 0
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*Full View Please*Hmmm... don't know what to say about this. This pic bothers me. It's the first time I've taken a background out of the vector program into PSP 9 and did somethign to it, but I like that. There's something bothering me about the girl. I don't know what it is. If anyone has an opinion please post. I feel something is off but can't pinpoint it. Any ideas?
Done in Microsoft Expression Design
Background taken in PaintShop Pro 9 and altered
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I don't know what looks weird... I really liked it!
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[link] This doesn't look like something you gave permission for?
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Wow... I really like it... but looking at the hair line, the middle point isn't in line with the nose... perhaps that's what seems so weird to you?
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It's something with the mouth I think... but I'm not quite sure what? Size maybe? But I think it's more the expression.
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i think that maybe the mouth is too far up.
i donno
when i look in it big view i dont notice it.
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well, it may be the proportions of her face (mouth too small, forehead and eyes too big) or it could be that her whole head is too big, although I believe that's your style anyway. It could also be the way she's standing, it looks a bit unnatural for her head to be turned that much if her body is at almost a 90 degree (or more) angle to it
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I just think it's the hairline personally. I don't think in matches the flow of her face :S
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I like this, but to me it looks like she is bent in the shoulder area.. Other then that i think it is just fine!
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Aww, I thought the same thing before reading your comments...
I hate too when I do a drawing which is good (no obvious error/problem) in the details but looks wrong overall...
Not that this drawing is bad, far from it, but it is... different from what you do usually.
I suppose that in an anime, she would play the bad girl (with brows more frowned...)
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Lol! Bad girl 
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she's really cute though she looks a little older than most of your girls which might be because of the chin being longer than you usually draw it and the corner of the chin isn't directly under the nose...but it doesn't look wrong since it's a common thing in anime drawings.I love the hair tho :>
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Thanks for the detailed comment, I super appreciate you taking the time, and it makes me feel better lol! I think what was bothering me was the hair line. Now that it's been a bit. I don't think the hair line is correct at all, and I don't know how I managed to get it so out of whack. THanks about the hair, I love it too! 
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She's cute. I don't see why it's bothering you. Maybe it didn't turn out exactly like you intended it to?
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wow........................wow..................wow.....................wow
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I don't see anything wrong with her! she is so pretty! 
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X3 no probleme dear ^^
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pwetty!
the cg work just keeps getting better and better *o* i'm jealous! lol
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Yay! Thanks so much for saying so!
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I guess it might be her shoulder
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Nothing's wrong with it. Good work, Chrissy-san
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I can't seem to pinpoint anything wrong. Looks good to me!
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Pretty. I love the hair and the outfit. Great colouring. Cool background.
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Hey wow! I love the colors you used! The little lollipop is really cute as well
As far as what's wrong, I think maybe it's her back. It might be a little far out; if you trace a line from the back of her neck to where her back comes out from behind her arm, it's a little hunched. I'd say maybe push her chest out further and then pull in the line of her back. Anyway, that's all I can think of
Love the fun details
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Wow! You can draw great Anime! 
Maybe the colours
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It's great ^^ i don't really know what may be wrong
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yeaa...i see what you mean...
i think its somthing with her mouth...
not sure
anywhos
i think its fantastic either way
her hair is awesome
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I dunno... might be in the face...
But it's really cute mom!
The hair is so detailed, and even if the background is simple, it looks really good^^
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Emm there's something not right with the hairline....it looks like the face was placed on the hair, when naturally it should be the hair placed on the face...
but other than that an excellant drawing, she is very cute and her hair is great
*faves*
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Maybe the mouth is too small? Especially in relation to the size of the eyes. But it is a valid anime-type style. Maybe a bit too much forehead also. But she is still cute.
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