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Published: 2011-02-15 01:50:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 26185; Favourites: 126; Downloads: 574
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First, thanks everybody for the comments on the scraps of "Miss Doomsday" I posted recently. I read everyone of them and take them quite seriously. I decided to finish up and put together the second page for the re-do of "Miss Doomsday" I'm working on. The page above is the finished result.Let me know which you prefer, the original ([link] ) or the new one above. Let me know which you prefer, as I'm rather torn between the two, accursed indecisive soul that I am.
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UPDATE (2/25/2011): I modified the original page a bit, fixing a grammatical error in panel 1, replacing the middle panel with a more dynamic panel, and modifying the legs on the 4th and 5h panels.
UPDATE (3/9/2012): I replaced panels 4 and 5 with a newer version, one that I feel is more expressive. I also modified the toes on her left foot. Special thanks to for his critical input with regards to the page.
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Comments: 114
I like more this one, the poses are more interesting and prettier and the angles too. Also the masks look cooler too, you can see more personality in them.
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Thanks, Jade! I prefer this version, as well. The figures are more natural.
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Thanks! I'd love to be cat if I could snuggle up near a gal who looked like that.
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I definitely prefer the new one
look more dynamic than the old one^^
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Thank you so much (and I totally agree).
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Thank you so much! I really do prefer this version over the old one.
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Thank you so much, Larry. I'm tweaking this page and that but I'm not starting over on the comic. Onward, ho!
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Onward to good pastures my friend.
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Thank you so much, Philip!
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No problem bro and I love the new icon
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I appreciate it, Philip. I thought it was time to change things up a little bit.
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I actually REALLY like the second version of this page better. In my opinion, it shows so much more life in the posing, and I really like all the angles better. Also, I love how the cat is on top of the alarm clock...they always do silly things like that.
It looks amazing, Zac! ^__^
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Thanks, Ailynn. I like this version better. I think Anne's poses are more sensuous and believable in this version. I also prefer the drawings of the cat in this version than the previous one.
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(The older version was awesome too...it's just that THIS version is perfect!) ^_^
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I like that much better, Anne doesn't look so cramped up in the fourth panel now.
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Thanks, CitizenWolfie. Your critique got me to take a second look at the page. I thought about making it only a focus on the clock but I couldn't help drawing Anne's body. Instead, I made it a bit more obvious that the cats resting on top of a clock.
I appreciate the critique you sent me and will be modifying some of the other pages accordingly.
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Really works bud, nice job.
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Wow! Both pages are great! But I personally like the original one more ! XD
That second panel in the original one had so much spark and personality!! Oh and I also loved the last panel where you could see her totally sweet lips and teeth! And also her face in those two bottom panels.
This new page looks more "normal" to me.
haha anyways that's just my inexperienced, uneducated, useless opinion! XD
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Thank you so much. This is a story dear to my heart but it's currently in hiatus. I'm not sure what to do with the story. It's already scripted but I'm not sure whether to keep drawing it or start over again.
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Oh, I know how that feels. Hope you make up your mind soon.
I's an incredible comic!
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I love the masks and the cat. And of course the girl herself. And her clothes. And the inspired clutter...
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Thanks! I had to wrack my brain to think of things that might clutter a girl's room.
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These are definitely better-drawn, the use of perspective really helps the panel in the middle (great job thinking of stuff to fill the room with, BTW, it has personality!) and the style kinda reminds me of Brandom Graham, which is a plus. One thing I would comment on is that the last panels have become more about how hot she is than the action in them.
Unless that's the point/I'm the only one distracted by her boobs
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Thank you so much for the critique. I think I like this version, too. I had a bugger coming up with all the things that might fill a girl's room, especially since she's not the tidiest girl on the planet. Thanks for the compliment about Brandom Graham, too.
I did place a lot more emphasis on her sexiness in the second version. I just couldn't help myself.
Regardless, the comic, for me, is a lot of fun to draw.
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Thanks! It's amazing all the things you can do to a cat. Skip it's meal time, though, and those suckers will make you pay for it dearly.
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Nice art man and if I'm honest I think both versions are the page are equally as a good
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Thank you so much. I'm thinking of sticking with this version. Although I've gone through several versions of the comic, I think this one will be the last one.
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I woke up ten minutes ago and now my day is brighter!
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Thanks, Michael (and I appreciate the fave, too). Cool gallery, by the way. Your style has a classics illustrated look to it.
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Thanks a lot! Also, thanks for putting me on your watch. I'll have a lot more pages out next week.
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Supersexygirl in this one!
Very good details, mate!
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Thanks! This is actually one of my favorite pages from the comic.
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I think both versions has potential, but I prefer this version. In this version, you have a varitey of angles and also there's a bit more detail in this one. I like the third panel because it gives the readers an idea of the environment and it also tells us a little bit about the main character. Good job with this and keep up the good work.
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Thanks! I also like this version because Anne is so much sexier.
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Haha, yeah in this version she has more of that bad girl attitude.
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I like that chaos in her place (similar to mine I have to admit). Cool detail: the chair leg on top of her jeans.
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Ah, sounds like you have the home of an artist.
I really had to rack my brain to come up with all the objects lying around in her room. There's quite a few of them!
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Perfect. Love those changes. The new mid panel looks awesome (great perspective, great pose, great details) and I like to changes you made her legs (more toned and female, less sticks). Nice one!
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Thanks! I prefer this version, as well. I think it succinctly describes Anne character, but she's still sexy as well.
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