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Published: 2012-11-26 21:05:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 633; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 3
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-Please Critique-Drew this for the "Draw it again" thingy :3
This is Lionblaze, Jayfeather and Hollyleaf from the warrior cat books. I kind of fell out of reading them (they were being dragged out far to long x.x) but I still love the ones I read <3
Sorry about Holly's fur, I was running out of black ink x.x And I definitely colored Jays pupils black instead of dark blue and then I was like "Crap, he's blind" so yeah, ignore the tiny flaws XD
Original drawn in 2007:
Art (c) Me
Warriors (c) Erin Hunter
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Comments: 20
Cobalt-Flame In reply to nat1555 [2015-07-09 17:39:47 +0000 UTC]
Haha yeah, I'm so basic :'DĀ
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nat1555 In reply to Cobalt-Flame [2015-07-10 19:22:49 +0000 UTC]
XDD lol my comments were so cold looking XDD
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Cobalt-Flame In reply to nat1555 [2015-07-14 02:14:50 +0000 UTC]
It's okay, I'm used to replying to all sorts of comments :'D
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UnearthlyCanine [2013-04-22 15:05:12 +0000 UTC]
I love the way you drew Lionblaze, and Hollyleaf isnt purple lol jk
This is a great improvement. I loves it!
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Cobalt-Flame In reply to UnearthlyCanine [2013-04-22 20:55:33 +0000 UTC]
Thankq! Haha, I know. Little me was all like "If I color her black, then her mouth and nose won't show up!" so I wen't with purple XD
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UnearthlyCanine In reply to Cobalt-Flame [2013-04-22 21:45:49 +0000 UTC]
Lol they look great. I love the colors
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grouchywolfpup [2012-12-06 19:55:41 +0000 UTC]
There's definitely some great improvement here! I really like how you gave all three of them different poses. The one on the left is definitely the most engaging, and I think that has to do with the depth/perspective on him. You could probably add some depth to the center one by coloring it's belly and back legs that shadowy dark grey, to make them feel further away. I have to compliment you here on your colors, though~ they're very well balanced! That orange color is very hot and dominant, but the way you carry it through the picture (by curling his tail between the other two and adding a sun on the opposite side of him) works really well. I love that all of the colors are leaning toward the warm side, too. Like that blue/green sky! It makes all of the colors work well together. Gosh, that kitty on the left is just my absolute favorite~ I love his expression! Such a cutie. Really well done, darlin' c:
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Cobalt-Flame In reply to grouchywolfpup [2012-12-06 21:25:04 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow! Thanks for this amazing critique
I really appreciate it ^^
I'm glad you like it I'll try and add more depth and shading in future pictures, thanks for the tip ^^ Yeah, the orange one is the strongest, so I'm glad he looks dominant. And I love vibrant colors, so I always try and use some of them XD
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Koby-chan [2012-11-27 20:39:39 +0000 UTC]
Certainly, you've improved a lot! I believe your art is more detailed now <333 Looks awesome~
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Vampynella [2012-11-27 18:27:54 +0000 UTC]
Great improvement! <3 I really like the cats' faces, especially the middle one's :3
Bad critique incoming! I think you should try to add a bit more different kinds of green and yellow to grass, it makes it look more alive and ummm what's the word.... variating? x'D Same with sky, a bit lighter/darker color or something. Tho it's hard if you don't have many different color pencils to use
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Cobalt-Flame In reply to Vampynella [2012-11-27 20:57:38 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Yeah, he's my fav <3
I will! I just need more markers :/ I can shade pretty well with my 100 (crayola ) colored pencils, but its harder with only 36 markers. I'm really hoping to get some more copics for Christmas ^^
Thanks for the critique by the way :3
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Vampynella In reply to Cobalt-Flame [2012-11-27 21:07:04 +0000 UTC]
Oki doki I hope you get some then <3
My pleasure~ <3
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StartheJolteon [2012-11-27 03:04:05 +0000 UTC]
u did a RLY good job 8D and i love cats too X3
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