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Name: Alissa HeartsongAge: 17 1/2
Sex: Female
Occupation: Princess
Personality: Out going, tomboy, disobedient, caring, carefree.
Things about her: Well, she dislikes being a princess so much yet she was born into a strong royal line. Her best friend, Scott, recently became a knight. So she's wanting him to become her body guard and match maker for a perfect husband.
Dislikes being called "My lady." It makes her feel spoiled.
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XD Not a perfect profile but, eh. <3 You get the idea.
A new RP doing with the same person I RP'ed Mani's story out with! :3
drawn by =Karen-Windwaker
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Comments: 16
Blackfirm [2010-02-27 22:26:07 +0000 UTC]
She doesn't really look tomboyish...
Plus, you should work on making your lines cleaner, right now they look pretty sketchy, just a general advise. Also, I think you should work on hands rather than hiding them ^^''
Hands, or gestures, can give much more life to a picture and at the moment she looks pretty boring.
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Coco-Apple In reply to Blackfirm [2010-02-27 22:34:54 +0000 UTC]
Where she lives, she is forced to dress this way.
This is a sketch-like line. My lines are usually more cleaner.
And eh...it's just a ref picture. o-o; I'll be improving her over time.
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Icyshadowlord [2010-02-27 07:03:59 +0000 UTC]
Interesting, though her progile makes her lean a bit towards a Mary Sue.
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Coco-Apple In reply to Icyshadowlord [2010-02-27 14:42:19 +0000 UTC]
fff...
She's totally NOT a mary sue.
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Icyshadowlord In reply to Coco-Apple [2010-02-27 15:34:13 +0000 UTC]
Well, it depends. I usually say that the reaction of other characters causes that. But usually princesses and all that are blamed for being Mary Sue (I didn't say she is one, by the way.)
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The-Bongmaster In reply to Icyshadowlord [2010-02-27 16:12:15 +0000 UTC]
shes definatly nothing to do with a many sue XD
for one thing a mary sue is normally the writer writing themself into the fiction, and having amazing abilitys
karen is not such a writer XD
(similar thing is "Wesly Crusher" chars in star trek fanfics.. the writer writes themselves into the fic as a friend of a main char [eg. picard] and saves the ship or crew in fantastic way.. >_> like a total nerd)
this has nothing to do with this tho XD
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Icyshadowlord In reply to The-Bongmaster [2010-02-27 16:19:01 +0000 UTC]
I believe you, and I never said she is one DX
I know the definitions of a Mary Sue!! XD
But I hardly ever see the author style Mary Sues, I usually see the godly spotlight-stealing ones...
Either way, stop attacking me, I never called the character a Mary Sue DX
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The-Bongmaster In reply to Icyshadowlord [2010-02-27 19:33:50 +0000 UTC]
it wasnt an attack it was just a description XD
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Icyshadowlord In reply to The-Bongmaster [2010-02-28 08:26:48 +0000 UTC]
Well, either way. Issue has been resolved, to my luck.
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The-Bongmaster In reply to Icyshadowlord [2010-02-28 11:15:47 +0000 UTC]
yay! XD
and all was right with the world :3
a bit
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Coco-Apple In reply to Icyshadowlord [2010-02-27 16:33:05 +0000 UTC]
Totally not spotlight-stealing ones either.
Don't criticize it if you don't want to be attacked.
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Icyshadowlord In reply to Coco-Apple [2010-02-27 16:39:37 +0000 UTC]
Well, okay.
I'm sorry if my critique didn't turn out to be constructive.
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