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Roesavlon [2020-04-18 02:03:40 +0000 UTC]

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DavinaXart [2020-04-10 23:31:26 +0000 UTC]

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Darkmax204 [2020-04-10 12:19:38 +0000 UTC]

I saw ya asking for some Critiques on the server so there ya go;



It's a Beautiful Piece, Looks Mysterious but also Really interesting, makes me (as the one who doesn't know much about Ash) want to read the story to find out who he is and what he's doing.
Not to Mention Ash's Design itself is pretty "Capitivating" too- He hawt stfu

***GTA V LOADING SCREEN INTENSIFIES***


Now let's get into the Critique and some Detailed shit xD

Positive points:
+I love the Overall Cinematic Effect, Kinda Reminds me of John Wick. Though I can definitely see the Comic style you pulled there too.
+The Colors you used are pretty beautiful too, it's a good mix and important thing is that they're nicely balanced, doesn't hurt the eye nor take the feel away. Do that style in your actual comics and you'll keep the readers' emotions focused!
+Speaking of Coloring and lights; The Light Reflections on the bike look Legit/Realistic idk what you wanna call it xD
+For a Comic, the details on the Bike and Ash himself are Perfect, not too detailed to distract nor too lazily-drawn.
+This is more about feels than the "Artistic" critique you asked me but, the Rain "FEELS" Real, y'know what i mean.
+You Did a good job on the Perspective too!
+The Textures you used are pretty good as well.


` /Ash Doesn't look anatomically correct, well, his spine doesn't XD - though This one i ain't really sure about, i don't know if you made ash look like that on purpose since y'know, we like to say he's part enderman xD `

Negative points:
-The thing that really bothers me is the Bike, it has Reflections but no shadows where the tires touch the ground, maybe try making those areas darker a bit? maybe that'd do good?
-Ash's Reflection on the ground could be more Distorted, 'cause he's walking on an Asphalt street.
-This one's a Personal opinion; There's something about your art style that looks very "Clean", and i love it. but the noisy brushes that you used for the rain and white reflections strips that feel away. I'd recommend not using it.
-The chain on Ash's belt could be more shiny, it looks too lifeless being all black.



SUGGESTION TIME BOAH!

⦁    You could add some Light Flares like the ones i use around the lamps and on the bike (reflections), it would look more "Dramatic" this way.
⦁ Maybe a couple of Shinning particles around the lamps too.
⦁ Ash's Demonic ||  **Right** ;> || hand can have some light rays/particles around it.



but then again, that's all personal opinion since i'm not a Drawing Artist whatsoever.  and i hope I didn't offend you in any way.

Overall, nine outta nine You're Pretty Good!


Also, would you mind seeing my take on this drawing of yours? see what i exactly mean?

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Darkmax204 [2020-04-10 12:17:25 +0000 UTC]

"Bites za dusto"

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gatesway [2020-04-08 08:13:44 +0000 UTC]

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JoePingleton [2020-04-07 03:23:48 +0000 UTC]

amazing artwork

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OFFICIAL-AURA-ART [2020-04-06 16:14:30 +0000 UTC]

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Tyoka [2020-04-06 13:50:35 +0000 UTC]

Cool bike

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Geogrill [2020-04-06 13:22:12 +0000 UTC]

ASH

FUCK I LOVE THIS MORE THAN  SHOULD-
ASJBSJSFJDFHFS

I'm getting vibes of AU-- I mean what

lmao this is inspiring me again stOP-

jk don't xD

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JaneValentine007 [2020-04-06 13:04:12 +0000 UTC]

YOU TALENTED, BEAUTIFUL YOU!
YEAS! WE SHALL CONTINUE TO INSPIRE ONE ANOTHER, DEAR ARTISTIC BRETHERAN! XD

PLAY DAT QUEEN SONG! 
ANOTHER ONE BITES THE DUST! Lol!

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MariJ80 [2020-04-06 00:55:54 +0000 UTC]

SKSKSKS THIS IS AMAZING AAA
KEEP GOIN GURL!
YOUR BRIGHT N COLORFUL FUTURE'S WAITING FOR YOU! OWO ❤️

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HeatedPanini [2020-04-06 00:01:36 +0000 UTC]

Yooooo this is amazing!

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WeirdStashGangstaCat [2020-04-05 18:51:18 +0000 UTC]

IM GLAD MY INSPIRATION AND MOTIVATION HELPED YOU! THIS TURNED OUT SO AWESOME COCO! I get huge Amibian vibes. Amibian who turned against his own kind. ;3

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MasterTerra3 [2020-04-05 18:20:19 +0000 UTC]

legends say this picture is still loading on discord

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