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Code-Aracnum β So this is goodbye?!
Published: 2013-06-25 15:29:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 117; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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"But I don't want to say goodbye!"Ouch. My feelgoods. I just finished mystery dungeon. I forgot to show that that's a cliff, but it is. Constructive critism PLEASE! I don't have premium, so I can't request it ;=; I finally started shading!!
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If you wish for what I would do your in for a ride.anyways here:
The blue and black PokΓ©mon does not have the lighting of the stars(at least I think they are stars) I would put a glow.
Also I would add more toning to make the water look like water.
Also the fire on the char's tail should look more like fire if you added a bit of orange and yello then mend it with the spray tool.
But other wise I love this.
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Also, JPEG killed the quality DX
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I made that with MS paint DX
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I Really like the positions you put the characters in, and the shading looks ok, but i suggest you should have shaded under the cliff to give more depth. Smaller Claws on the Charmander will make it look less Evil.
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Yep, I forgot to do the cliff shading XDD
Yeah, I didn't realize that it looked evil X3 Thankies!
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I cried while drawing that.. ;/\;
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Yeah, Kori was like, "Over a video game!?" *Plays* "I understand now..." *Sob* X3
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XD i haven't made it to the end yet...
I need to let you know something though. i Believe at the end of the game, after all the credits and stuff, if you go back to play again, you'll have an after story, or you've unlocked a new 'Side Story'you can play by accessing them int he menu. then there's this whole after story thing for what happened if tou stayed and didn't leave.
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Holy... I remember that!! I forgot about it, so now
I need to play it...
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Lol, can't right now, though. My Ds ran out of batteries.
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