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Published: 2013-12-27 19:35:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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It's a redraw of this old picture. codearcanum.deviantart.com/artβ¦Don't badh it, please. Just asking for constructive critisism, ot's not like I'm saying "im new 2 this so plz b nice" or anything. Just asking you not to flame it, as I have a rocly history with such things on other sites.
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I think the picture has a lot of potential to tell an amazing story actually. Maybe if you widened it a bit, zoomed out, and wrote a little about the situation in the description it would help. The lines seem a bit rushed as does the coloring since it doesn't even stay in the lines. Perhaps if you took your time with it it would have left more of an impression. A bit more detail is needed on the blood/wounded area as well, it kind looks like it fell into a bucket of paint. All together though the picture has great potential and it'd be great to see you practice and maybe remake it again. :3
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Thank you ^^ I'll try to take my time! I've beennhaving trouble finding a decent line speed, but I think I'm gettingnthere. I've also devolped a bit, so hopefully the redraw three will be better XD
Though, I'm happy with the amount of improvement, if you compaee the two XD
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