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Published: 2011-10-10 03:46:37 +0000 UTC; Views: 213; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Final story board page!If you really liked the rough story, and you can't wait for me to begin the outlining and stuff, send me a note! I'll send you the script of the rest of the story I made so far! It goes much further into the plot...
I'll only send it to a select few b/c I really can't be sure who won't claim the story as their own, but if you're part of the Geno club, or a follower, or a friend, I'll probably send it!
I hope you enjoyed the beginning of it!
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*SOBS* WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME, BLUUUUUU, WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY. *SOBS*
Well, I ended up commenting on every single page unlike what I've said earlier, but who cares. I don't mind at all, and I hope you don't.
I love your source of new conflict - it's not a return of Smithy or anything of that source. In fact, it's really mysterious and I really wish I knew what it was. >:U
And I can't wait to see how the new characters play out, and I'd love to see them fleshed out a bit more. This will certainly be interesting.
Willow reminds me of Mallow - he's very cute. I'm not sure if it's intended or not, but if it isn't, be careful with characterization - don't have Mallow fans thinking you simply replaced him with a similar person.
Epic zoom on Geno and Friends.
I think I have an idea where this story may go next. c:
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Thank you !!!! ; v ; now that i'm on winter break i'm going to work on it more!
And you're right about Mallow, that has been worrying me a bit. Especially their names are too similar I just noticed!! : O
The thing about Willow: Unlike Mallow, he isn't a cry baby (well except for when Darkstar rammed into him, but I mean, DS knocked out most of his stars he collected all year!). And unlike Mallow, he is very unaware of things socially, is a bit gullible, naive, and shy. He's a bit of a drama queen, sensitive but out of all three can see logic clearest. Although I agree his childish nature is a bit too similar, and i'm wondering if I should change his character to someone different entirely.
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