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Published: 2016-12-09 20:36:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 2212; Favourites: 54; Downloads: 0
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'I'm trying Master! I'm trying!' Amenii choked out, beads of sweat matted her brow as the ball dropped several inches at her lapsed in concentration.'Clearly.' Master Yarro spoke with disdain. Without looking at her, his meaty hand closed around a fist of the metallic training spears. 'Here. let me make it easier for you.'
With the full force of his body, Yarro hurled the projectiles towards her.
Amenii screamed and tried to will them to stop, she may have been wishing the sun to be bolted out. Several of the projectiles went wide, but the bulk of the metal balls struck her painfully. One cracked against her temple, and with it she lost all concentration.
Her single sphere fell to the polished floor with a crack joining the multiple clones of it lazily rolling across the room.
A general murmur of snickers came from the far side of the room where the other apprentices where training their saber drills. Their practice had long stopped to better watch the amusement unfolding across the room.
Amenii felt her cheeks burn, but she kept her eyes down. ‘I’m sorry Master.’
With a snort, Yarro, leered down at her. ‘I had expected more from you Patawan Amenii, yet you continue to disappoint.’ His gaze shifted to the group of young Patawans across the room before returning to her.
His implications clear. She had been stripped of her training saber after an accident that had nearly cost her an arm. Yarro had denied her the use of a bacta chamber, insisting that the pain would be a lesson of its own. He had then barred her from attending the classes until she ‘demonstrated she had the aptitude for such a task.’ Amenii knew she would probably never hold a saber again if Yarro had his way.
‘Clean this mess up.’ Was all Yarro growled as he turned to leave the room, paused, and then added. ‘Without touching them.’
‘Yes Master.’ Amenii turned her head, not willing to let him see her cry.
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Code-Shark In reply to ??? [2016-12-12 22:20:13 +0000 UTC]
She's trying to lift a metal ball with the Force. and having a very hard time of it.
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bioazard [2016-12-10 02:13:20 +0000 UTC]
Awwwwww so cute and sad !
let her go tempted by adventure with a cute and fiery bountyhunter hyena !!
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Code-Shark In reply to bioazard [2016-12-10 09:13:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you, and yea Nera is in here to- something like that, yes.
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Code-Shark In reply to Goldham92 [2016-12-09 23:14:49 +0000 UTC]
Amenii continues to try and lift the balls into the bin with the force. Half the time her efforts succeed.
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Goldham92 In reply to Code-Shark [2016-12-09 23:17:17 +0000 UTC]
don't stress it, let it flow in you.... *I said in my meditation*
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Code-Shark In reply to Goldham92 [2016-12-09 23:39:29 +0000 UTC]
Amenii tenses, the ball she is holding in the air, strikes down into the bowl with a snapping force driving several of the balls out in a shower.
Screaming, hands wrapped in claw like grasp, another ball flies off the floor and slams the bowel with enough force to shatter it.
Breath coming in ragged gasps, she grins at you, a flicker of mania in her eyes.
'Like that?'
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Goldham92 In reply to Code-Shark [2016-12-10 00:02:53 +0000 UTC]
*smiles* close, but seek peace and meditation from time to time *the balls float around me with out using my hands*
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Code-Shark In reply to Goldham92 [2016-12-10 09:27:50 +0000 UTC]
Letting out a deep breath Amenii settles herself on the floor
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Goldham92 In reply to Code-Shark [2016-12-10 18:20:12 +0000 UTC]
*I lifted my hand to wave away the spheres from *
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Code-Shark In reply to Goldham92 [2016-12-11 02:35:49 +0000 UTC]
'You make it look so easy.' she mutters.
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Goldham92 In reply to Code-Shark [2016-12-11 02:41:38 +0000 UTC]
it takes practice, young padawon. like I said, find peace and let the force flow through you... *smiles and turned my palm down and lowered it, lowering the spheres.*
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Code-Shark In reply to Goldham92 [2016-12-12 21:51:53 +0000 UTC]
Amenii sits, crosses her legs, closing her eyes in concentration. The marble before her twitches but does not rise.
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Goldham92 In reply to Code-Shark [2016-12-12 21:58:46 +0000 UTC]
*smiles a little and went back into meditation*
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Code-Shark In reply to TheHook1 [2016-12-09 21:33:15 +0000 UTC]
Having read a shit ton (four cubic butt loads) of the extended universe I can say that they started becoming Ass Hats shortly around the raise of Darth Bane. And they only got worse, let me tell you. Sith did the galaxy a favor with Order 66.
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TheHook1 In reply to Code-Shark [2016-12-09 21:53:07 +0000 UTC]
This is why every good galaxy needs a cape-buster squad. Because the second any random collection of dumbasses in stupid costumes get powers, its only a matter of time before they throw shit at the fan.
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TheHook1 In reply to Code-Shark [2016-12-09 22:21:27 +0000 UTC]
Never team up with people you can't kill later.
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Code-Shark In reply to TheHook1 [2016-12-09 22:29:29 +0000 UTC]
That ones going into the rule book!
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Code-Shark In reply to db1993 [2016-12-09 21:34:33 +0000 UTC]
Apparently her best is just not enough for her Master. But he's not known as a very nice teacher.
Still, she appreciates the support.
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db1993 In reply to Code-Shark [2016-12-10 04:44:50 +0000 UTC]
I see^^.
That nice that I gave her support
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Code-Shark In reply to db1993 [2016-12-10 09:22:36 +0000 UTC]
I cant be too monstrous, now can I?
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Code-Shark In reply to MasterShifulover [2016-12-09 21:01:43 +0000 UTC]
Slave, of sort - apprentice, she is trying to become a jedi. But, not being very skilled with the Force, she is having a very hard time.
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MasterShifulover In reply to Code-Shark [2016-12-09 21:19:17 +0000 UTC]
Thats sad, but she is still tough to fight it
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Code-Shark In reply to MasterShifulover [2016-12-09 21:38:09 +0000 UTC]
It's her nature, stubborn to the end.
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Bruticusdude65 [2016-12-09 20:44:08 +0000 UTC]
Shadtrax: want me to deal with this master character?
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Code-Shark In reply to Bruticusdude65 [2016-12-09 21:35:21 +0000 UTC]
Alas, Yarro was the only one who was willing to train her. She was deemed Force sensitive, but as you can see, she is not that strong.
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Bruticusdude65 In reply to Code-Shark [2016-12-09 21:40:40 +0000 UTC]
RA: im willing to teach you Amenii, if you will let me
(RA is a femme god character in my TOLM story, yes i know its a guy but my version is a female)
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Code-Shark In reply to Bruticusdude65 [2016-12-09 21:54:49 +0000 UTC]
Hey, when you said Ra, my first thought was to an old D&D character of mine, this Ra:
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Bruticusdude65 In reply to Code-Shark [2016-12-09 21:57:50 +0000 UTC]
(naaa the helmet is similar but mine has a humanoid face with a face plate on you'll see when i post her cause she is a MOC WIP)
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Code-Shark In reply to Bruticusdude65 [2016-12-09 22:06:02 +0000 UTC]
MOC WIP? Got to bring me up to speed on my acronyms.
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Bruticusdude65 In reply to Code-Shark [2016-12-09 22:07:21 +0000 UTC]
my own creation work in progress
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Code-Shark In reply to Bruticusdude65 [2016-12-09 22:27:08 +0000 UTC]
I look forwards to see it.
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Code-Shark In reply to Mach-The-Hedgehog [2016-12-09 20:44:28 +0000 UTC]
He is not, that and Amenii barley made the grade. Just strong enough to be force sensitive, but not a very strong wielder.
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Mach-The-Hedgehog In reply to Code-Shark [2016-12-09 20:46:59 +0000 UTC]
Well das a shame... maybe she'll be better as a knight.
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Code-Shark In reply to Mach-The-Hedgehog [2016-12-09 21:51:01 +0000 UTC]
If she is ever giving the chance, don't worry to much, she's got a friend to help her.
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BlazeNekoFox [2016-12-09 20:39:19 +0000 UTC]
i just thought of an AU of your Zootopia characters, based on this
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BlazeNekoFox In reply to Code-Shark [2016-12-09 22:10:41 +0000 UTC]
it's from Amenii saying I'm trying "Master! I'm trying!, it's like her master is giving up on her, well one day he/she does, and kicks her out, it also turns out that Amenii has no money and no where to go
Nera becomes her new master
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Code-Shark In reply to BlazeNekoFox [2016-12-09 22:26:54 +0000 UTC]
Oh you can bet he has already given up on her, and wants to kick her out. Nera is an apprentice like herself thought.
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BlazeNekoFox In reply to Code-Shark [2016-12-09 22:29:35 +0000 UTC]
in my AU it's not star wars nor have Nera and Amenii met, they fall for each other as Nera trains her
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Code-Shark In reply to BlazeNekoFox [2016-12-09 23:16:40 +0000 UTC]
I like that, it sounds really cute.
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