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Name: Raven Storm DancerAge: 18+ (She gets older as her story progresses/when she starts a family)
Gender: Female
Species: Black winged fallen angel, who has sided with the devil, can hide wings
Alchemy (1 ONLY): Black angel (so demonic angel working with the devil)
Special Abilities: Causes storms, casts alchemy circles, brought her dead little sister back to life, can cause plants to wilt when she is angry
Height: 5’ 2”
Weight: 87
Personality: conflicted, has times where she just rages, smart, likes to pull pranks, kind to those she considers family. loves her sisters and wishes she could be there for them(she used to be an angel, but after bringing her other sister back she was cast out for using dark magic)
Family:
- Twin sister Alice
- Little sister Emily
- Lyell (her boyfriend)
- Aero (her son)
- Yuna (her daughter)
- Shadow (Lyell's best friend/pet)
History: After the loss of their mother Mira, Emily began to get very ill, once bedridden Raven tried to look for spells to save her. Without any warning Emily collapsed in front of their mother’s grave and passed on. Unable to control her sadness over losing both her mother and little sister over only a period of one month Raven did the unthinkable, she used the dark arts and brought Emily back to life. Shortly after she was brought back Raven was casted out and called a traitor. So Raven had nowhere to go. The darkness manipulated her, making her make a pact with the devil to save her sister’s life, so now her soul belongs to the darkness. She was born with black wings, a sign of misfortune. She used to be sweet and nice, but is being controlled by the contract.
GUARDIAN ANGEL:
Not every angel is a Guardian Angel, Raven is, she has GUARDIAN'S BLOOD flowing through her veins, it was passed down to her from her father, its why she can live so long, anything can kill her, anything but old age, which is replaced by something... A bond with someone she loves, once its formed she won't die of old age ever, but if they are to die it will be the death of her, she would die of a broken heart. Her mother wasn't a Guardian angel, that's why she and Raven's father bonded, when she died he was breaking inside, that's why he was searching for a way to bring her back, he was then wounded by the council, but he died of a broken heart. If one is to reject a bond then they could also die even if the partner is alive. She has chosen to bond with Lyell, it makes her powers greater, and it proves her love for him.
Weapons used: Twin swords
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: In relationship with Lyell
HERE I AM
(I forgot to update her age info as she went through some adjustments after I originally made her, she gets older as the story goes so I added the "18+" to be able to better explain on this older art that she goes through various years of story/development from when I first created her)
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Comments: 129
Ah, yes she would die is her mate was human, but her mate is a dragon who can live for over thousands of years fav.me/d6frwym
And her sister ran out because she wanted to go grieve for her mother
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Ah okay.
And the girl was bedridden?
Bedridden means you cannot leave the bed
she would not be able to 'run out' and grieve for her mother.
I mean she was fatally ill she wouldn't really be going anywhere
let alone /running/.
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I mean bedridden in the sense that her sisters wouldnt let her leave bed, she was able to move
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bed·rid·den
ˈbedˌridn/
adjective
confined to bed by sickness or old age.
synonyms:confined to bed, sick in bed, laid up, immobilized, flat on one's back
Also that doesn't change the fact that she was fatally ill and probably not able to leave the area quickly/run out.
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Well my story doesn't have to make sense, its a curse, sometimes its worse or ease up then takes them, she is part angel, she already is stronger than human
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very ill means very ill
no matter what the species as its very ill specified to that species in that sense.
and the sisters shouldve been watching
if they were genuinely worried js.
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Well if you just lost your mother I'm sure you wouldn't be all there either, and very ill for an angel in my story doesn't mean much ok
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I would be there enough to watch over my ailing sister.
And very ill means very ill if it doesn't mean much she wouldn't
have died over it.
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Well not everyone is the same, they were doing things, gathering herbs and cooking, she went out the back, you can't tell me this hasn't happened in movies before...
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It hasn't happened in any of the movies I've seen that involve death of loved ones/illness of a loved one.
And that doesn't change the fact that they were being bad sisters by not figuring out a simple plan
to watch over their sickly sibling while the other went to collect herbs and such.
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Well I've seen a fatally ill girl run from her bed to do something in tons of movies before, and her family thought she was asleep o they were doing chores
THAT does NOT make her sisters bad people!
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Can you please tell me the name of at least one of those movies?
And I didn't say they were bad people, I said they were being bad sisters.
A five year old could puzzle something as simple as that out and yet they
couldn't. Either they didn't bother or were too daft to figure it out.
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I can't remember the movie title it was among the few my dad was watching and his movies are weird, I don't remember the names of the ones he watches.
I would like it if you left my story alone, I am sorry if it isn't "to your liking" but it doesn't have to please everyone
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Okay, sure.
And I'm not asking you to change it, no, it is your story.
I'm just saying it makes little to no sense. I've also seen you've
hidden all of my comments.
Very mature.
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I've hidden them because you are being rude with your criticism, I didn't ask for your criticism, in fact if you haven't noticed I've been hinting at the fact that I don't even want it to begin with. You can't understand that it is my story and I don't need you to run a muck of it.
You know what? You go make a story and I'll go critic it and we shall see how you like it, obviously I don't seem to like what you are saying so please stop it
Very mature? Wouldn't a mature artist or writer know that if you have nothing nice to say you don't say anything at all? Also there is a golden rule when it comes to art or writing, always find something nice to say about the piece, if you can't than seems like you are on the wrong path.
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Mhm, okay. I'm sorry if I came off blunt, really, I am but I wasn't trying to be rude.
I'm upset for you, because that is not what I meant.
And I do make stories, and I would take well written critic just fine, and okay I shall stop. I wont
continue this anymore.
And to be honest hiding all the comments is not mature, not really, because that makes it seem like
'Oh, I don't want anyone to side with the other person'. And here, I think Raven could be a very good character
she just needs more development. If she had that development I'm sure she'd be exceptional. All I was trying to do
is help with that. I am not the first to think illy on some attributes of her character, know that, but I do not see
her as a bad character entirely. Her design is nice, her personality could use a bit more work such as 'depressed'
that is something that causes changes in the personality not the personality itself you see, and her backstory doesn't
need to change all that much. A few minor switches and it'd be fine.
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Well if you just wanted to "suggest things" than the way you came off wasn't the right way, the way you came off was a less desirable way
And the reason I've hidden them is so no one else gets involved, do you really want people to start butting in and bickering as well? I've had that issue before, not them against me, but it isn't their business.
You might be thinking I am being immature but I have good reasoning to be hiding these comments, till this is resolved thats how they will be
And did you stop and think I have more to the story already that hasn't been posted? She is an RP character, her story is explained in the RP's done, so what is posted her is only a rough outline, did I post on this that she has 2 kids? No because I haven't updated her at all
Raven is someone I haven't added info to in a long while since the group failed
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I am sorry that it came off badly. That was not what I was aiming for and
if anyone wants to join in on the bickering you can kindly tell them to back off.
And whether or not the group failed I feel as if it's important to update your app
or bio for your character if you wish to pull her out of the group. As you progress
with her (or any of your OCs) story via RPs I'd suggest to keep at updating it on
a regular. Or at least add some of the big stuff.
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Well I have been offline cause of school and I'm back (got back the 19th) so all the things I had been set to do got pushed back since I decided to focus on school instead of DA
Well I'm thinking of just doing a new drawing of her as she is now to inform everyone of her new family, the app I had stopped doing things to since no one in the group cared, I instead said stuff here and there on her in other drawings I've done of her.
I just didn't want to deal with others butting in cause its not their place and they would have made it worse even if I said back off.
The person I RP with has been gone for a few months so I just forgot about Raven for a bit, I have other characters that I have been developing as well, she isn't dead but I just didn't have time to add anything
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I'm just saying for future reference, that's all.
I'm sure you've had your reasons. And although that's
better than nothing, leaving a bit here and there, some
people don't read through all of your drawings.
It's not because of anything against you, people just don't
sometimes, y'know?
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I know that but I've been trying to keep everything on her in a folder called Chaos Battle
And now that I think of it in Inuyasha there was several cases of ill people leaving their bed while their family or friends were out, like Unigumo (not sure of spelling) who was burned to near death and was said to never be able to move again
And I honestly can't remember all the details from the RP its been a long time, I could try to show the RP but Id have to collect a lot of stuff to do so, to log it
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That's an anime isn't it?
I mean yeah I guess this is considerably fantasy too but anime has
its own rules, that universe has its own rules so ;; Not the most
credible source.
And like I said before future reference.
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Yea and Raven is drawn in anime style, the story is fantasy, I mean a dragon boy who controls shadows can't possibly be anything but fantasy
I just haven't really had time to do anything, if anything my other characters are more developed, I've just gotten my break
So are you saying you have interest in my character than?
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Just because a character is drawn in anime style
doesn't mean the world around it follows every other anime
and it is fantasy but its a different type of fantasy. Y'know?
And I'm not saying you have, I already said that I'm sure you
have your reasons to not be able to develop her/update her
properly. IE; time.
And I do. All characters tend to gain my interest at one point.
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Yes but the world Lyell and Raven are in has to be fantasy cause its really really odd, so I think everything is plausible for their universe
Yea its just been awhile, I don't even remember half the RP that was going on, and it was an intense RP
Ah, well currently I've been focusing on my book, Tale of Two Brothers
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I understand. I said it was fantasy, just a different type.
And some things should be limited or else the world would be impractical/unbalanced,
in my opinion of course.
Yeah.
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Well somethings are, hence why Raven has a contract with Varna, and why Lyell gets hurt if he is a dragon too long, and his dad manipulates him, so they are by no means gods XD but its a world of demons and angels and a few humans so its always interesting
I just have no clue what to do with Raven at the moment
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Of course some, and I never said they were gods.
And mhm.
I could help you/suggest something if you want if that'd help
give you a clue? ;;;
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Yea god modeling OC's isn't my style
Um possibly? I'm at a loss of what to do with her currently, so I've been working on my Melody, so I guess some suggestions wouldn't hurt
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Well what part of her do you want to focus on first?
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Hm? Um... Not sure? Uh
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Cause with Raven it was just an app with a character I had designed more on the RP so basically everything would have to be changed in the app to fit her now
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hello, i am somewhat new to this group
and there's this one question haunting me
what was the illness that killed both the mother and sister (well for the sister temporarily)
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It was a curse, but they thought it was just an illness, it was dark magic, I haven't revealed who cursed them yet
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thank you for clearing that up ; v ;
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Er welcome? Hehehe reading every character's bio? Hehe
This group has been inactive sadly, I want it to be active badly XD
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Ah yes I am.
And it seems to be. orz
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AH
And yea *sob sob* I WANT TO DO STUFF IN THE GROUP DX
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Is it good? I have more to add to it, she is special in a way, hehe
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Thanks, she is also a rare angel, a Guardian Angel, I tweaked the meaning of being one to fit the group, and Raven is one, a true Guardian Angel, its really neat, I could explain it if ya want
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The group ^
Not every angel is a Guardian Angel, Raven is, she has GUARDIAN'S BLOOD flowing through her veins, it was passed down to her from her father, its why she can live so long, anything can kill her, anything but old age, which is replaced by something... A bond with someone she loves, once its formed she won't die of old age ever, but if they are to die it will be the death of her, she would die of a broken heart. Her mother wasn't a Guardian angel, that's why she and Raven's father bonded, when she died he was breaking inside, that's why he was searching for a way to bring her back, he was then wounded by the council, but he died of a broken heart. If one is to reject a bond then they could also die even if the partner is alive. She has chosen to bond with Lyell, it makes her powers greater, and it proves her love for him.
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Yup, a alternate twist for the meaning of a Guardian Angel
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