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Description A little girl rejected by fate. Alone and forgotten save for imaginary friends she'd create.
Hatred consumed stricken child as she began her quest. A desire for power that would lead her to now before the witch of the west.
Starved for attention she pushed through the pain.
An empty desire that fueled her. A reason to remember her name. Through respect and fear she sought to rule. All those beneath her mere pawns and tools. Her greed knew no hounds as she sought maidens pure. The power they used for peace would be here. Of this she was sure.
She the destined one. The one to be seen.
She who bows to no one. Save for the queen.
Through charity or bribery. Intimidation or damnation. She recruited them all. Promised power or destruction. To them her name was Fall.
Through black gems she molded heinous weapons of bastardized design. Cruel impliments of death were her drive to be prime. Stolen power half devoured. Left her hungry. Seeking more power.
Her horrid plan went through with a flash.
Carnage and death as the tower did crash.
Though in her firey triumph. One small matter went ary. The silvery light of a simple soul's cry.
It's light tore her body to shreds.
Blinded and scorched. She quickly fled.
Half her body in shambles. She found her resolve.
A desire for vengence drove her leap from her crawl.
But not all dreams can come true for when we manipulate. It only serves to brew in allies a delirous hate.
To repeat her performance in the chamber of Spring. Would not be so simple before the raven and her offspring.
A clash of fire and ice raged down below. Massive destruction became the theme of the show.
But experience outweighed desire. She would.meet her peer.
The difference between power wielded for months versus years. Frozen in terror was her once confident face. Such is for Cinder who must ensure her fall from grace.
Bound and breathless. Her voice found.
She echoed in laughter as her body was bound.
Tormented by her victims. A summoned knight and an angry schnee. Along with ghostly hands and ashes of a Pyrrhic victory.
Suffering eternal this soul warped Grimm of a shell.
Confined forever in her frozen ticklish hell.



COMMISSIOON DONE FOR with the Cinder the "villain" of Rwby ^^ and as I wanna assume a fitting punish and end for her ;D
I hope you all like it ^^ btw The poem was a nice touch from who helped the commissioner ^^ I hope you all like it and more comissions soon!
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Comments: 57

DimensionDefender [2018-04-01 12:51:33 +0000 UTC]

Am I the only one who wishes Roman was there? He'd want some revenge on Cinder too.

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codricor1 In reply to DimensionDefender [2018-04-06 02:19:30 +0000 UTC]

hhhhhmmm good point,but XD more direct are these two ^^
MAYBE PENNY also XD

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DimensionDefender In reply to codricor1 [2018-04-06 05:25:53 +0000 UTC]

Four ticklers at once. Oh how fantastic that would be. Ooh! Make that five if you count Vernal! Those three are probably waiting for their turn.

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ReaverPan [2018-03-17 20:41:01 +0000 UTC]

nice

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PhantomBeast98 [2018-02-17 05:16:36 +0000 UTC]

Cinder deserves this!! You go Pyrrah and everyone else that's tickling her!Β 

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codricor1 In reply to PhantomBeast98 [2018-03-12 04:29:31 +0000 UTC]

SHE DOES she does deserve so much! XD

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PhantomBeast98 In reply to codricor1 [2018-03-12 20:23:19 +0000 UTC]

You got that right. That's what she gets for killing Pyrrah.

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Micanite [2018-02-07 23:09:28 +0000 UTC]

Can you do one of Velvet and Coco?

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codricor1 In reply to Micanite [2018-03-12 04:29:42 +0000 UTC]

I Dunno ^^ maybe maybe

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Naga-Asura [2018-01-31 17:22:30 +0000 UTC]

Aw man, this was a real treat from you man!! I love this!! Cinder is definitely waifu material and I'm so happy she could be tickled in your art style!! Keep it up!!

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codricor1 In reply to Naga-Asura [2018-03-12 07:12:32 +0000 UTC]

she needs more tickles! XD

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Naga-Asura In reply to codricor1 [2018-03-17 03:38:35 +0000 UTC]

Well, maybe once all my OC commissions are done, I'll buy a few more tickles for her lol XD

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Kermitthefrog223456 [2018-01-22 22:31:58 +0000 UTC]

Aww...

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alphazion [2018-01-21 01:32:20 +0000 UTC]

Looks really good!!

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codricor1 In reply to alphazion [2018-03-12 04:35:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you! Β 

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pirata3 [2018-01-20 03:49:57 +0000 UTC]

Jaja, veo que ya te salen los pies mΓ‘s delgados.

Buen trabajo con la perspectiva, lo hiciste muy bien en el acercamiento a los pies

Gran imagen Gabe

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codricor1 In reply to pirata3 [2018-03-12 04:30:35 +0000 UTC]

jajajaja poco a poco pero... que lento XD

gracias hermano me alegro que me haya quedado bien y te gustase!

GRACIAS!!Β 

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SeaSaltCastle [2018-01-20 01:23:42 +0000 UTC]

Cute

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codricor1 In reply to SeaSaltCastle [2018-03-12 04:29:53 +0000 UTC]

thanks !

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Kslider [2018-01-19 15:33:58 +0000 UTC]

Super good, but this is also major spoilers seeing as this episode still isn't available to the public.

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codricor1 In reply to Kslider [2018-03-12 04:35:42 +0000 UTC]

oh.. damn! XD well... hope her look dismiss people!

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sheut5 In reply to Kslider [2018-01-20 05:30:23 +0000 UTC]

It's open to anyone with a free rooster teeth account lol. But don't think this is a spoiler.

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LaReforma1857 In reply to Kslider [2018-01-19 20:50:53 +0000 UTC]

XDΒ 

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DarkShaquille [2018-01-19 14:56:03 +0000 UTC]

BOOM SHAKALAKA!
NOW THAT, FILTHY FALL IS FOR TRYING TO KILL WEISS YOU SASSY...

Ahem*
Well,Gabe, hellanice!
Amazing work! I knew you were the man for the job!

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codricor1 In reply to DarkShaquille [2018-03-12 04:30:48 +0000 UTC]

I KNEW YOu would love it!!! ^^

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DarkShaquille In reply to codricor1 [2018-03-12 10:29:43 +0000 UTC]

XD

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ImHere101 [2018-01-19 13:56:14 +0000 UTC]

While i was watching Rwby a shot of her foot on Jauns chest happened. And i realized that Cinder has wide feet.

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codricor1 In reply to ImHere101 [2018-03-12 04:31:11 +0000 UTC]

she is also older if I am not wrong XD and taller than some ^^ so yes she does!

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fattyboy32 In reply to ImHere101 [2018-01-23 12:16:33 +0000 UTC]

All of the characters have wide feet, it’s the character models they use.

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The-Puff-T4rd [2018-01-19 13:32:59 +0000 UTC]

You sir got rhymes it takes so much time to make, and you’ve really shown the others how we play. Cinder sure is the one to punish and she is indeed ruthless but she ain’t that ruthless while to this.


This is some good work man, keep it up.

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codricor1 In reply to The-Puff-T4rd [2018-03-12 07:11:20 +0000 UTC]

Well part of it was done by the commissioner he had the poem BUT I am happy this was a nice work together !

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The-Puff-T4rd In reply to codricor1 [2018-03-12 09:51:29 +0000 UTC]

I see.. It sure is man, keep it up. BD

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banX8 [2018-01-19 10:45:13 +0000 UTC]

So Cinder can laugh sometime

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codricor1 In reply to banX8 [2018-03-12 04:35:49 +0000 UTC]

SHE CAN AND SHE SHOULD!

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banX8 In reply to codricor1 [2018-03-12 09:09:16 +0000 UTC]

XD i love villains (especially sexy one) taking their share of tickles
Love how proud and tough they try to act

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ShriekyMori [2018-01-19 09:49:56 +0000 UTC]

Aw! Her poor little feets! You do such an adorable job of coloring in the blush <3

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codricor1 In reply to ShriekyMori [2018-03-12 04:36:15 +0000 UTC]

XD I don't think she deserves the word POOR! XD but sure she does the tickles! hahaha and thanks man

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Aaron235 [2018-01-19 08:39:56 +0000 UTC]

This looks amazing! Β Great job

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codricor1 In reply to Aaron235 [2018-03-12 04:36:36 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot!

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Aaron235 In reply to codricor1 [2018-03-12 08:04:25 +0000 UTC]

You're quite welcome

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DerGamer [2018-01-19 07:59:28 +0000 UTC]

Nice, I like it. Β 

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codricor1 In reply to DerGamer [2018-03-12 04:36:41 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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DerGamer In reply to codricor1 [2018-03-12 14:38:51 +0000 UTC]

^_^

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CorvusCorrax [2018-01-19 06:47:43 +0000 UTC]

Frosty! Well hell froze over for her. Now call ahe can do it laugh!

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Karasu-96 [2018-01-19 06:47:26 +0000 UTC]

Very cute and satisfying at the same time XD

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codricor1 In reply to Karasu-96 [2018-03-12 07:11:33 +0000 UTC]

SHE SO MUCH DESERVES IT! XD

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edoserpico [2018-01-19 06:37:29 +0000 UTC]

great cutie and feet xD

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codricor1 In reply to edoserpico [2018-03-12 07:11:45 +0000 UTC]

thanks man!Β 

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GreenJack21 [2018-01-19 06:31:23 +0000 UTC]

I was wondering how long it'd take someone to do this. XD

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codricor1 In reply to GreenJack21 [2018-03-12 07:11:53 +0000 UTC]

XD SHE TOTALLY DESERVES IT! XD

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