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Page three.P1: [link]
P2: [link]
I like the shadow style here, but I should've drawn them more carefully.
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Comments: 19
Wingwisher [2011-10-03 17:25:06 +0000 UTC]
The Hand/paw-things (Seriously what the fuck are those things?) in the top panel are all raised, however 2 of them are down in the middle panel. That is kinda annoying, but other than that it is pretty good
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CodyRiolu In reply to Wingwisher [2011-10-04 00:16:32 +0000 UTC]
Again, you think too logically.
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Wingwisher In reply to CodyRiolu [2011-10-06 22:13:42 +0000 UTC]
Logic is nachos for the brain. MMM brain nachos... I wish I had corn chips to make nachos...
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Koopus [2011-10-03 07:41:21 +0000 UTC]
Really nice! The sequence is very clear and highlights the changes well.
One thing though... Shouldn't the height dip in the first panel showing the heads? It's possible the shrinking starts directly after the face transforms, but the second panel and third panel seem to be happening simultaneously at the same time from different angles...
It's clear that he's shrinking of course, and that detail of the head sinking down across the panel isn't necessary to establish the fact as it is so clearly expressed in the other panels...
But... Just a suggestion.
Awesome work!
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CodyRiolu In reply to Koopus [2011-10-04 00:19:55 +0000 UTC]
When I was drawing the second panel, the original idea was for just the body to change, and not the legs, and that the panels would go in order, not the first then second and third at the same time. Then I decided that that having the body change without the legs would look weird...
...and I'm lazy, and don't feel like redrawing stuff
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Koopus In reply to CodyRiolu [2011-10-04 10:41:57 +0000 UTC]
Well, the sequence does make sense, if you consider the first panel a separate progression, and the following two below as happening at the same time...
I've realized this just now...
Even the discontinuity pointed out below about the paws being lowered makes sense then, as they could have been lowered directly after the head changed.
It's a very small, reasonable rationalization to make, so I don't find a single problem with it now.
Excellent job!
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CodyRiolu In reply to Artooinst [2011-10-04 22:28:52 +0000 UTC]
I've been trying to get commissions, but so far nobody's had 200 to spend on a drawing...
What was your idea, though?
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Artooinst In reply to CodyRiolu [2011-10-05 05:53:45 +0000 UTC]
Me turning into a Raichu?...
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CodyRiolu In reply to Artooinst [2011-10-05 20:36:32 +0000 UTC]
Eh... Maybe...
(There was a guy on FA asking to be turned into a Lucario... )
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