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Published: 2017-01-10 23:10:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 377; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 0
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So I did a redraw ;w;ΒOf this...
I can smell the improvement ;0;;
Hope you like it <33
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The hair is very well done. It is looks very soft and resembles cotton candy in a very beautiful way. I also love the shading of body. The softness of the shading is very pleasant.
Something I would like to point out is the direction of the shadow. The sun is shining on her right so the shadow should be on the left.
Remember that shadow is casted when an object blocks off the light.
Right now, it seems to me the shadow appears before it even reached the pony.
The position is also off and doesn't match where the legs are.
I think a little bit more details on the bushes/plants would match the detail and effort you've put into the pony, which would bring the whole picture together.
I can definitely see improvement and I think you did a great job.
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Something I do like about this picture is how you drew Fluttershyβs hair. The way it just blows in the breeze like that seems very majestic. I also like how you mapped out the background, putting the trees on mostly the left side and the mountains on the other side. I have to compliment you organization! However, there are a few criticisms I have. Firstly, the fact that the sky is covered brightly on the left half but then becomes darker and more purple on the other half seems very inconsistent. I suggest you pick a time of day to set the scene in. Second, Fluttershyβs shadow could be darker and stretch further out if the Sun is shining right down on her. Lastly, you could make the chunks of fluff on her chest smaller. The way you have it now doesnβt seem very realistic. Now of course, this is not a bad drawing. Like I said, Fluttershyβs hair is nicely drawn, as well as her body. Plus, it does seem to capture her free spirit and tranquility. I certainly think itβs better than the older version. I just think that the previously mentioned critiques should be taken into consideration. Still I want you to keep up the great work, Coffee-Draws!
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Coffee your art is making me artgasm again
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I'm scared to critique this, - I don't want to seem annoying ;v;
but this is absolutely marvellous !
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Don't be scared to! I ask for critique for a reason
Thank you so much <33
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THE FUCKING MOUNTAINS MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM
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*sharp inhale*
BOIII.
THE EYE is perfect.
THE BACKGROUND is perfect.
THE ANATOMY is perfect.
Everything is PERFECT.
I'm freaking out ;v;
I'm sorry ;v;
The mountains get me ;v;
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You're welcome! <3
And I want to say...
You've improved so much! <3
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Thanks, it took me ages ;w;;
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