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Published: 2017-01-22 09:08:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 1120; Favourites: 73; Downloads: 3
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My precious son.I actually drew him facing the other way and then realized I drew him backwards, so I had to flip him over. Β Crisis averted.Β
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Here for a quick critique!:
Ya boii, here is looking really nice. I especially love your Don't Starve-esque style on him.
Lines: Your line variations are good stuff. Using thinner lines for the details, and then changing them to white where it gets too dark is something I really appreciate here, since I've seen a lot of dark lines get lost when they also have dark colors behind them. I think the lines do well to create form. I really like the way you shaded around his elbows. It's super neat!
Value/Lighting: This dood seems to be missing true whites, making things look just a little bit flatter than if he had more white accents. Otherwise your lighting gives him some good form! (although slouching, hue hue). Oh, and even though this is a png, BEcause it's a png, it would be cool if he had a shadow some where around him too!
Texture: That skull chain has some good metal feel about it. Love it.
Color: The warm tones feel reminiscent of warm Alola. 
Anatomy/pose: Anatomy is great for the most part! I feel like his left upper arm is a bit long, but that could just be me. I feel like he's about to take a step with his left foot too. His feet angle seems a little wide, like he might waddle a little. But besides those things, everything looks great anatomy and pose wise! He might have a bit of trouble wearing his glasses with the nose piece down so low.
Story: I love his expression. He has some sort of vacant cat stare, like he's tired or something, but still able to get around just fine.Β
I think this is just on the edge of being another "standing-kun" piece, where the figure was posing for the camera. Like if I were to ask myself what Guzbruh was doing here, I would say, "Standing and spinning a pokeball." As it is, he's super cool looking right now, don't get me wrong. Mainly, what I'm getting at is to create a conversation with the viewer, that or an emotion or feeling. If I find a piece like that, I usually find myself going back to them.
Anyway, Overall, this is one cool dude. A couple technical issues, but nothing bad. Super rad variation of that guy, Guzma.
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Yeah the glasses are super wonky. Β I'll have to fix em for him next time Guzma waddles back into my gallery. Β
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