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Published: 2011-09-16 19:27:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 135395; Favourites: 979; Downloads: 816
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Tired of being the victim all the time, Lucy decides to take on low level mission alone. She hopes to show her guild members that she can take care of her own.Afterall, handling a mission of that level should be a problem, even for her.
She was venturing alone in a dark temple. Hunting for what ever she needed to get rid off to help the locals.
The description was rather vague :
"Unexplained disappearances in the temple. Bodies found in excrement suggests some creature feeding on men. No witnesses were able to tell what we are dealing with here."
"Rewards : a thousand jewels"
Lucy shivered.
Being some creature's dinner wasn't in her agenda. Maybe i got over my head she tough.
Lucy : "Okey.... This was a bad idea. I'll just come back w...."
These would be Lucy's last words.
The creature found her before she could find it. It was hudge and yet moved with increrible speed. She never saw it coming. Coils wrapped her completly, squeezing her so tight, she couldn't speak anymore.
Lucy : "Argh... Gnaa...."
Fear quickly turned into panic. She struggled to break free, but there was little she could do against such a powerfull muscle.
The coils got tighter. Crushing her. Her struggles stopped as her efforts were now focused on her breathing, rather than escaping.
If only she could call for help.
Lucy :" Ga... a....."
The coils continued their work, squeezing her even more. Now breathing was simply impossible. Her mouth was wide open, begging for oxygen that wouldn't get inside.
Lucy : "........"
Not a sound was coming out of her mouth either.
To make matters worse, she couldn't hear anymore. The only sound she could listen to was her own heart-beat and a constant whistle. These were signs that her brain wasn't oxygened anymore. The whistling got louder and louder.
Her skin turned pale, than got purple. Her blood wasn't flowing anymore. Blood vessels appeared over her eyes.
Still the monster continued to squeeze Lucy tighter. Her exposed flesh was changing shape, like she was about to pop like a ballon.
Maybe her body was totally crushed at this point. She didn't know or cared. She could only think about one thing : BREATH!
Lucy : "a.... agh...". A last effort, but still no air was allowed to her.
As her mind began to slip away , her iris turned white. Those eyes that used to sparkle with life, now gave place to nothingness.
Her brain was slowly shutting down with her last toughs *I'm... really ... useless... am i? Can't even deal ... with ... one lone... monster. I guess... it's better... this ...way..."
The snake gave her the last ultimate hug.
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Comments: 73
Rexben [2020-09-10 10:41:24 +0000 UTC]
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bythethousand [2019-03-12 16:21:09 +0000 UTC]
Well as food she isn't useless anymore!
Everyone has a purpose!
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Duskdoggo In reply to bythethousand [2020-03-18 05:10:16 +0000 UTC]
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davionpuryear [2016-07-30 04:48:32 +0000 UTC]
Now it want one of Lucy being snapped in half and hung, great picture could you do one of Erza when she comes looking for Lucy
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Rock-on-USA [2015-12-09 00:10:21 +0000 UTC]
More like, "The snake gave her the last ultimate squeeze."
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Ash-08 [2015-10-25 15:27:20 +0000 UTC]
Great drawing and Excellent story with description
I love it so much
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Jameswork [2015-10-17 22:23:57 +0000 UTC]
Joseph jostar:Β Β OH MY GOD!Β
Jotaro: Β YOU SNAKE BASTARD.
Mario: Β MAMA MIA!
Flain: Β AAHHH!
Rokit: Β HOLY SMIXELS SHE UNDERATTACK!
Me: OH NO! DON'T WORRY LUCY WELL SAVE YOU!
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William6208 [2015-07-13 04:22:21 +0000 UTC]
My reaction: i.imgur.com/i3IfafU.gif?norediβ¦
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uniquelyfabulous [2015-04-19 14:20:47 +0000 UTC]
Wow! So brutal. I like the colour you chose for her skin tone. Poor Lucy....
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sarah21234 [2015-01-19 07:32:15 +0000 UTC]
She is probably wetting the floor so much cause she is in such deep fear..
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devinlrok In reply to sarah21234 [2022-07-10 04:48:14 +0000 UTC]
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sofia2320 [2014-06-21 02:30:36 +0000 UTC]
looks like lucy got a nice tight hug, a little too tight if you see her eyes, mouth, and skin color in that manner... nice job on the coloring by the way - i've seen your black and white one.
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Ikoter [2013-09-11 09:54:25 +0000 UTC]
When i saw this, i bursted out in laughter, but now that i read the description... kinda sad.
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LinkHelios234 [2013-06-29 11:37:29 +0000 UTC]
: Hey Snake Let go of Lucy now
Let's go Sacred Phoenix God Slash βLink's attack destroy the snake's head and saved Lucyβ
thank you Link
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zombiehunter2 [2013-03-12 01:21:55 +0000 UTC]
no..........she is not going to die!! *super ultamite powerful zombie punch on snake now*
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sage-of-irrelevence [2013-02-07 21:08:11 +0000 UTC]
Um, 1000 jewels is about 10 US dollars in real world currency. I think the reward for capturing a man eating creature would be a bit more than that.
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Wyfar [2013-01-08 15:56:44 +0000 UTC]
I love it ! both the pic and the story, but my favorite part is her last thoughts ^^
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GajeelRedfoxRocks [2012-10-28 03:07:32 +0000 UTC]
Yea! Another person who thinks Lucy is useless. Other people fight for her. She is no mage, just a sissy.
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TBoneTony [2012-01-11 15:05:58 +0000 UTC]
I guess Lucy needs to get stronger before taking on large snakes alone.
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Dex-lover-sarah [2011-11-15 20:53:53 +0000 UTC]
why did she have to die,,gah i mean its not cool riting about someone die by a snake,why do people find this arouseing.she souldnt have died.
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Thesquarewave [2011-10-10 21:33:06 +0000 UTC]
Good plot. Other than that I'm speechless right now.
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Kei-Waza [2011-09-19 15:41:04 +0000 UTC]
A solo mission for just 1000 J!?
That's like 10 bucks in our money!
Nice btw....
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linkinpunk123 [2011-09-18 16:38:28 +0000 UTC]
I love the colored version. But the story makes it MUCH BETTER!!! You have done another splendid job.
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thean2 [2011-09-17 16:20:20 +0000 UTC]
aww...
this is amazing!!
I really love it >////<
and your stories are awesome too. favorite!!
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CoilFreak In reply to thean2 [2011-09-17 17:33:31 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
Most people freak out when they look at my art or stories. I guess girls being squeezed to death or strangled isn't a fetish for most.
Glad that you enjoy it.
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solidzesnake In reply to CoilFreak [2011-09-28 23:23:44 +0000 UTC]
you know coil I have the same problem, every time I draw a pic or write a story I am always asked if the victim survives, I am glad you choose not to comprise
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thean2 In reply to CoilFreak [2011-09-18 01:16:25 +0000 UTC]
youΒ΄re welcome.
Well, all persons are different. I respect everyone, I also like to know them a little to understand them. Some come to like me also. I do not judge before knowing. I am a girl of open mind to new things. :3
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rctdelta20 [2011-09-17 13:51:50 +0000 UTC]
very well done the story was quite entertaining
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kimjongheel [2011-09-17 13:32:35 +0000 UTC]
oh god what? How can a girl make that orgazmic look when she's going to be crushed to death?
The snake gave her the last ultimate hug.
oh no she dies ._.
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Waste-Of-Flesh In reply to kimjongheel [2011-09-29 02:13:01 +0000 UTC]
Her head is gonna blown.
Just like in that movie "Scanners".
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kimjongheel In reply to Waste-Of-Flesh [2011-09-29 03:27:43 +0000 UTC]
This artist needs to be choked to death.
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Lumfan247 [2011-09-17 12:37:30 +0000 UTC]
1000 Jewels?! What a rip-off! When Life or death is involved, missions almost always break into the 100,000 range if not the 1,000,000 range!
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gordanfreeman25 [2011-09-17 04:39:24 +0000 UTC]
poor girl >': i like squeezes but i dont want em to diez >':
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TwisterZ [2011-09-17 04:36:26 +0000 UTC]
This is a million times better ! You made me a happy man , cheers
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