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Published: 2008-05-21 02:37:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1636; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 43
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Hey folks, sorry this took so long. I am trying to get these done on a weekly basis, but I got caught up with stuff over the weekend.Also, sorry about the bait and switch. The first page was mainly to set up for the main comic. However, I enjoy referencing it in the first panel, and it still might be a portent of things to come. Looks like we get to meet Asura's friend Kate [link] in this page.
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Comments: 13
EICHH-EMMM [2011-01-10 00:22:25 +0000 UTC]
this helps me so much for real thanks for making this comic
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Cokomon In reply to EICHH-EMMM [2011-01-12 01:58:37 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad it is helpful to you
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fairypeek-a-boo [2008-05-22 05:46:17 +0000 UTC]
Ooh, i like your manga so far ^^ Keep up the good work
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Cokomon In reply to fairypeek-a-boo [2008-05-22 06:41:09 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I hope that you keep up with it.
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Paruser [2008-05-21 15:41:45 +0000 UTC]
Rat + Magic
...I fear for this rodent's life and sanity.
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Menasha-AshD [2008-05-21 02:55:45 +0000 UTC]
awesome haha! Keep them comeing. Something I like about Japanese comics opposed to others I've seen is the integration of text bubbles. If you notice, the text bubbles are used to move your eye's across the art work. So it's kinda like
textbubble ----> artwork ---->textbubble--->artwork
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Menasha-AshD In reply to Menasha-AshD [2008-05-21 02:56:15 +0000 UTC]
You kind of have that here, but not to the extent I like. I feel it's just easier to read.
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Cokomon In reply to Menasha-AshD [2008-05-21 03:00:09 +0000 UTC]
Well, it is my first page and this is the first time I have tried doing a comic that is bigger than doodles in my school notebook. I know what you are talking about, and I am still trying to figure out how to get the flow right.
Still, thanks. I'm glad that you are still liking the comic. I have a few more pages sketched that I need to get cracking on soon. Hopefully I will get it out on time next time.
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Menasha-AshD In reply to Cokomon [2008-05-21 04:29:40 +0000 UTC]
Alright cool. When your done your first chapter ill critique the whole thing?
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