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Published: 2005-01-15 21:11:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 216; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 36
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Description This is number 10 I think in the suicide girls challenge. Her name is Adore...
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Cold243 [2005-01-20 18:15:04 +0000 UTC]

*whispers* thank you...

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skritch [2005-01-20 17:21:18 +0000 UTC]

Ok, this is really nice. Probably one of your best pieces thus far. To be honest with you, there is little that I can find wrong with this piece without really nitpicking. But there are a few things. (Thought you were going to get off the hook, huh? LOL) The color in the hair is very good but the hair as a whole looks a little flat. It is obvious that you have been working on your shading on the face if you were to also work on the shading in the hair, I think it would help to give the hair more shape and body.

Her facial structure and porportions are very good, probably your best yet, but the right eye and the nose are a little off. The eye is a bit too far over and the perspective on the nose seems to be just slightly wrong.

And now the good. The porportions are very good and her mouth especially looks very relaxed and natural. Your use of color is ever improving and the shading looks good, although it looks like you are being a little tentative with the color in the shading but that is probably a good thing at this point. As you become more familiar with shading, I am sure that you will experiment more.

Great Job! Best one yet!

skritch

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Cold243 In reply to skritch [2005-01-20 17:29:47 +0000 UTC]

Im glad you like this-this is probably my favourite so far (also the last one that scanned well!) in terms of shading etc. I agree on the eye,I didnt notice until I had put down several layers,and by then it was too late to change it! I didnt get as much time as I wanted to work on this,so the hair suffered as a result.Overall though,its my favourite

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skritch In reply to Cold243 [2005-01-20 17:54:07 +0000 UTC]

Confidentially? (whispering) so far, it is my favorite too.....

skritch

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Safir-Kreuz [2005-01-15 21:28:39 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful work, yet again I like the shading on the cheeks especially

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Cold243 In reply to Safir-Kreuz [2005-01-15 21:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you,yet again! Ive been working on the shading a little...

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Safir-Kreuz In reply to Cold243 [2005-01-15 22:12:05 +0000 UTC]

Welcome

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