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skritch [2005-02-14 17:36:41 +0000 UTC]

This is a nice drawing. I like the composition and the way you have her in the lower right hand corner. This is a slightly different composition layout but nothing too radical. The fact that she is facing the white space causes it to work and balance out. Remember, when it comes to compostion, it is all about two things. Movement and balance. Ok, and weight. Three things. LOL

The colors are a little muted in this drawing but that works in the pieces favor. More vibrant colors in the hair would have made the hair too much and too dominant. This way her eyes really stand out and it is clear that you intended for her eyes to be a focus of this piece.

The eyes are clearly the focus and are beautifully done. Your blending of the blue and green is subtle and well executed. The shapes of her eyes are a natural shape where as sometimes you have given your models more generic almond shaped eyes. The only concern is that her right eye has more green than the right. Remember, that we subconciously expect eyes to look the same. If they dont, it tends to feel 'funny' to us.

All in all, a great job!

skritch

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puzzlinging [2005-01-31 02:21:27 +0000 UTC]

those eyes are awesome

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