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Published: 2005-02-12 20:09:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 105; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description not my best attempt,but thats my own fault for chosing a photo with bloody awful lighting and a difficult pose...Im just a glutton for punishment!
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skritch [2005-02-14 19:33:44 +0000 UTC]

This is different picture for you but very nice.

You did choose a difficult pose but you have pulled it off very well.

Sigh....

You know drawing like these are difficult for me to comment on. Why, you ask? Well, it looks like you are starting to develop your own stylistic techniques (which is to be applauded and I am proud to think I may have played a small role in) and, as such, I find myself in the position of trying to decide which technique to critique - the stylistic ponts or the realistic points.

Sigh....

Well, until I see more of the direction you are heading, I will just make some general comments on this drawing.

First of all, the shading is very well done; giving depth, energy and warmth to her face. The lips are very nice. These are unlike any you have done before and they look great (even if her mouth appears a little small).

This is wonderful. Has a Picasso feel to it. Keep it up.

skritch

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Cold243 In reply to skritch [2005-02-14 19:57:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I hadnt thought much on developing a style as such,but I notice now when I draw there are some techniques I keep coming back to regarding shading etc.The overemphasis on the eyes seems to be another thing.I have been trying to tone it down a little, but it seems to be the eyes that attract the most compliments about a piece! If I have developed any kind of stylistic traits then I assure you that your tuition has made ALL the difference.I doubt I would even have the confidence to continue posting if not for your help,and certainly wouldnt have felt brave enough to explore different techniques. The critique you give on the realistic aspect of my pictures is always very helpful I have learnt so much about proportion and definition from your guidelines.

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skritch In reply to Cold243 [2005-02-14 20:10:12 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem.

I am really glad to see you developing a style of your own.

Yes, people love eyes. LOL You notice in my own work the eyes het more attention than anything else? Even when they are not seen or obscured, they get comments (Wet is a perfect example of this.....) I'll even admit, I like eyes as well. I will frequently start and end my drawings with the eyes....

I encourage you to keep working on your drawings (dispite my downbeat comments on your last one...) and to keep exploring your style. You keep doing it and I'll be here commenting.....LOL

skritch

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Cold243 In reply to skritch [2005-02-14 20:16:18 +0000 UTC]

np, Im too stubborn to quit now! Besides, if I didnt keep drawing I wouldnt get to keep learning from all my crits,and Ive learnt a LOT. Also, If I didnt draw I would be miserable and cranky!

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skritch In reply to Cold243 [2005-02-14 20:21:28 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I know how you feel. I get stubborn, cranky and irritable when I don't draw. LOL

skritch

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Safir-Kreuz [2005-02-12 20:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Very beautiful, I have a thing for unique colors of hair

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Cold243 In reply to Safir-Kreuz [2005-02-12 20:19:26 +0000 UTC]

lol,in that case you would love the real Alice! Glad you like, Thank you!!

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Safir-Kreuz In reply to Cold243 [2005-02-12 20:20:53 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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