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Cafe RoomRelated content
Comments: 16
AlexanderSteele [2009-10-06 13:59:31 +0000 UTC]
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The very first thing I noticed about this piece was exactly how blue the entire image is. The lighting provides a gorgeous color scheme, and in a way the entire room melds together. It's really pretty that way, and gives an impression of the room feeling very empty.
The light from the window onto the ceiling provides a really interesting touch, and combining with the light of the window makes a really pleasing area of light in that corner of the photo. That same light coming through the machine gives it an interestingly heavenly look, and sets a beautiful glare on the tables.
On the left though, the smallest bit of a chair is showing next to the other, and it looks like mess. I almost feel the left side should be cut ever so slightly, but can't be sure what the image will look like after that's done.
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TheMaidenInBlack [2009-10-06 15:21:03 +0000 UTC]
I agree on the critique given by *AlexanderSteele , but I feel this is into the wrong category. Why did you choose abstract?
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colddusk In reply to TheMaidenInBlack [2009-10-07 16:30:11 +0000 UTC]
i always have trouble giving the categories to my photos, which category i shall put it in ?
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TheMaidenInBlack In reply to colddusk [2009-10-07 16:58:08 +0000 UTC]
I'd say that as if, it seems to me, you wanted to create an idea through your picture, that Photography > Conceptual would suit it better. or Photomanipulation> Conceptual, if it's a manipulation.
If you want, =k3-studio from this site is an awesome abstract artist who I watch, he also got a DD today. Check his works out to see some wonderful abstract, you'll notice how they differ from yours.
I hope it helped you!
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colddusk In reply to TheMaidenInBlack [2009-10-18 20:30:51 +0000 UTC]
it really helped me a lot, thanks
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TheMaidenInBlack In reply to colddusk [2009-10-18 20:39:00 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad it did!
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Daniellasaurusrex [2009-06-14 18:57:32 +0000 UTC]
oh my god i love your stuff.
love the uhhh, machine thing. it looks cool ha.
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colddusk In reply to AndySimmons [2009-05-15 00:24:07 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. and thats cool, that i'm able to teach people new words haha
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ails-twilights [2009-05-14 09:41:35 +0000 UTC]
that's amazing!!
i love the colour and the lighting
it's a beautiful effect
well done
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