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Published: 2016-04-10 22:34:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 495; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 1
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Aaa started this picture as background practice mostly!! And because I need to draw more 'full' pictures, even though this one I wouldn't necessarily consider a full picture, haha. It's almost there but too chibi xDOh well, it was fun to make!
This actually took me a while, I started it on Thursday night. Idk the exact amount of hours it took but probably over five lol. I worked on it here and there over the weekend and pushes myself to finish it up tonight. xD Rip
Anyways, characters from left to right:
Mea (c) my brother | Zachariah , Misty (c) me
Mea and Misty are cousins and Zaia is a smol tol beb who is their friend lol.
If I ever end up making a Gravity Falls fan comic they will be in it /ovo/';.
Still trying to figure out if I'll do that haha. I have lots of ideas if I do,, though aa
//melts a bit
anyways yeah that's it, hope y'all like this and whatnot.
~cold*-
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ViralTetris [2016-06-20 02:26:15 +0000 UTC]
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Aw......first thing, I think they Ocs are just cute and I love the hair, and color choices. But there are some things that stand out. I think the arms are a little fat, the the grass looks like a carpet,I thought the hands look a little peculiar, and there's not much of a background but then again it's okay, because this is cartoon(sorry, this is my first critique on cartoons) The shading is average and I like the way you drew the trees. Overall I though it was cute and I like to see more. (sorry not good at this)
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coldioc In reply to ViralTetris [2016-06-20 02:33:39 +0000 UTC]
That's for the critique! This is a ((sorta)) old picture but I'll keep that stuff in mind when I draw more in the future 8)
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SavoryHarp [2016-04-10 22:53:17 +0000 UTC]
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Amazing work: let's review!!
Vision:
I LOVE IT. Fantastic!! It's got such a simple charm, it's cute, it's fun to look at, it's nice on the eyes, and all the colors work quite well together. Also you varied the heights, expressions and poses, giving it a natural look.5/5!
Originality:
You made these characters new and interesting- they weren't just a recolored already existing character, so big respect for that. However, these are fan characters, so there's no story or anything like that, which hinders the originality factor on this piece.
Technique:
Don't get me wrong- I love the piece to death!! It's cute, it's fun, and it's got that simple charm. But there's the issue. The simplicity may be charming, but it takes points away because of how basic it is- my main issue is the eyes. They're just black circles, nothin too interesting. However, DO NOT TAKE OFFENSE. Like I said, I love it!!
Impact:
I've made myself quite clear- I love this piece to death!! Fantastic work e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
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(Smile)"/> keep it up with the art- you're fantastic!
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coldioc In reply to SavoryHarp [2016-04-10 22:57:29 +0000 UTC]
Thanks a bunch! ^.^ And yeah, I normally don't go so simple ((especially with eyes, I love shading eyes, haha)) but I was going for something a bit different with this drawing. ^.^Ā
P.S., These guys actually do have some story I'm working on, just nobody knows it yet. lOL ;3 May or may not one day become a comic that I work on. //shrugs loudly
Anyways, thanks for the critique though! Glad you like it, and glad I could get a bit of criticism, people don't normally critique my work. ^.^
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SavoryHarp In reply to coldioc [2016-04-10 22:59:31 +0000 UTC]
No problem!! And I'm glad you took the simplicity thing well- some people would just get annoyed š
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coldioc In reply to SavoryHarp [2016-04-10 23:01:42 +0000 UTC]
Of course ^.^ People who ask for critiques and then get annoyed when they get them need to,,, grow up tbh xD lol
I'd understand if it was just a hate critique or something but real ones shouldn't be scolded for someone not agreeing with you pFFT
tbh I dislike getting critiques that are just "THIS IS SO AMAZING, OMG, WOW, THIS IS GREAT, THAT IS GREAT, THIS IS ALL GREAT". I never accept those ones, because they aren't honest or even critiques in the first place, just compliments |D rip
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SavoryHarp In reply to coldioc [2016-04-10 23:15:28 +0000 UTC]
Agreed dude.
Also those 5/5 star critiques kinda piss me off too :/
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coldioc In reply to SavoryHarp [2016-04-10 23:22:33 +0000 UTC]
yea lol
i try to be honest when i give critiques, so sometimes people might think it's a bit harsh but,, not really aa
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SavoryHarp In reply to coldioc [2016-04-10 22:59:19 +0000 UTC]
No problem!! And I'm glad you took the simplicity thing well- some people would just get annoyed š
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darklight624 [2016-05-08 01:38:46 +0000 UTC]
The ironic thing is that i have a character with the same name that i have yet to post anything about.
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darklight624 In reply to coldioc [2016-05-08 01:58:30 +0000 UTC]
I can is not tell.
Cuz would spoil dime-disturbed stuff.
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AnimalLover670 [2016-04-11 15:53:24 +0000 UTC]
I DIDN'T KNOW YOU LIKED GRAVITY FALLS
This is beautiful as always btw!
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coldioc In reply to AnimalLover670 [2016-04-11 15:55:30 +0000 UTC]
DUDE OF COURSE B))
also aaa 8D thank you so much <333
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coldioc In reply to AnimalLover670 [2016-04-12 17:35:14 +0000 UTC]
SHIT I LOVE BILL WITH A PASSION
hes like one of my all-time favourite characters in existance. x"DD
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coldioc In reply to AnimalLover670 [2016-04-14 18:03:03 +0000 UTC]
Cool! Is he your favourite or do you have a different favourite? ^.^
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AnimalLover670 In reply to coldioc [2016-04-15 15:32:42 +0000 UTC]
My absolute favorite is Dipper tbh
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coldioc In reply to AnimalLover670 [2016-04-15 18:05:21 +0000 UTC]
ah nice!! I love Dipper too ^.^
tbh I love all of them xD rip
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