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Published: 2019-04-11 17:51:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 3281; Favourites: 307; Downloads: 0
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Another piece for my project. I've been posting this around mostly saying "Not perfect, but finished" and truth is I'm not really happy with this. On one hand I love all the detail I was able to put together, but I also feel like the composition, the perspective and even the narrative feel kind of bad. There's just something slightly off in every one of those aspects and it's killing me on the inside haha
However, I feel like I've spent way too long on this one, so I'm calling it done as its purpose is achieved.
No matter the flaws, I sincerely hope you like it!
Have a good rest of the week/weekend
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Good work so far! There are tiny bits that stand out as you have realized, it's always hard to pinpoint mistakes in the artwork if you have been looking at it for too long.
I think it looks a bit too isometric in some places? You verticals are too straight for someone looking up, they should converge more towards the top, like in 3-point-perspective.
I have had that problem many times in my artwork so nudging everything with Distort tool goes a long way.
Also that red roof of the house in the middleground doesn't follow your perspective exactly into the distance.
Regarding the detail, you have a good amount of that in there but maybe you could tone it down in the foreground or
maybe just make it a bit more hazier/darker towards the edge of the image with a soft brush. Because as of now it's drawing the attention away from your focal points a bit.
Composition is also the distribution of detail.
But overall, it's a really good piece! If you work on the smaller issues you're reaching professional concept art levels already.
And don't stress too much about it, to the untrained eye this amazing. You're getting better and better thus you see more of the things that need to be worked on.
Keep going mate!
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