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colourcoded — Walk with me
Published: 2005-01-18 22:56:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 76; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 5
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I'm in a vally all it's ownit's a mix of emotions and thoughts
i look around for someone else
but i can't even find my shadow
the sun sheds everywhere but on me
it is clear and focused
and i am not touched
i feel no warmth here
there are doors all around
open, shut, locked, broken
i dont want to touch any of them
i dont really want to touch anything here
im lost
im confused
i dont know where to go
tell me which is up or down
there is a chair here
and thats where i see you sit
you look so different
not like yuo used to
take a walk with me?
be by my side here
my shadow's left
and i am lonely
when it rains
please don't put the umbrella up
i want to feel something
i want to feel something definate
Will you drop your coat
over the puddle
will you let me walk all over it
will you let me walk all over you
not for long
i promise
and i will step lightly
i just want to feel something under me
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Comments: 6
it's so pretty, lol, i really like your poems, you should be a writer,
-sita121
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this is increadible CC....whenever i read something of yours its always so emotional...i know you feel lost and this poem really gives insight as to some of what you are feeling...
amazing writing as always! fave!
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thanks sooo much. ur comment is so cute, lmao
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lmao....thats great!
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