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Description Spike: (sigh) Three little bundles of joy, Ember, I still can't believe we're finally parents!! And just look at them, aren't they amazing?
Ember: Huh? Oh, yeah, yes I'm really happy that they hatched!! Really, really...... h-happy.
Spike: Ember are you alri-
Spike turns his head towards Ember to see something in her arms. An egg, an egg that has not hatched five days after it's siblings did. Spike then looks at Ember with an expression that has a mixture of sadness and worry.
Spike: E-Ember, it's almost been a week, and nothing has happened, no sign of movement, no crack in the egg, nothing. Maybe... maybe we should just admit that....... we lost-
Ember: NO!! DON'T YOU DARE SAY IT SPIKE!!!! Y-YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT'S GOING ON IN THIS EGG!!!
Spike: We BOTH don't know what's going on in the egg. Ember, do you not understa-
Ember: No Spike, YOU don't understand!
Spike: ......Ember.
Ember: All we have to do is keep waiting.
Spike: Ember!
Ember tries her best to not let Spike see the tears that are rolling down her face, but he notices them instantly.
Ember: (sniff) A-and when it does hatch Spike...... y-you'll see that you were wrong!!
Spike: EMBER!!
At this moment, Ember stopped denying it, and broke down completely. Spike starts to cry a little too, but tries to hide the tears and comforts Ember the best he can.
Spike: Ember, I'm upset about this too, heck, I-I'm even infuriated!!B-but (sigh) we have to accept that..
Ember: S-Spike, please don't...
Spike: We lost our baby.
Ember continues to cry into Spike's chest, and Spike let's his tears run down his face freely.
Ember: I-I, I've only b-been a mother for five days, and I've already let one of my babies d-die, and the egg hasn't even hatched!! I could've done something, but I didn't even try! I'm a terrible mother!
Spike: Ember, there was nothing you or me could do, you are NOT a terrible mother.
Ember: But, I let our-
Spike: You did not let our baby die, It was just.. his or her time. But look at me, I am telling the truth when I say that I know you are great mom. You want to know how I know? Because we have three beautiful examples right here.
Ember looks down at her children. One was trying to get some sleep, but the other two were playing together, oblivious to the situation. Looking down at her three remaining whelps, through the tears, she smiled. She sees that she still has three healthy and gorgeous little dragons, three little dragons she loved to death.
Ember: (sniff) Thanks Spike, I love you.
Spike: I love you, too. And Ember I know you don't want to see the egg go, but I'll have to get rid of it soon. I don't want the kids to get curious.
Ember: A-Alright Spike, you can take the egg now, if... if you want.
Spike picks up the egg with his mouth and gives Ember one more sad look, and then he goes to find a place to bury it.
Ember lets a few more remaining tears roll down her face, but then she feels her three little whelps snuggling her. Her face instantly brightened up at this. She then proceeds to return the snuggles to all three of them, and turns her voice down to a whisper.
Ember: I love you all, with my whole heart. Don't you ever forget that.

Whoa, that was long! This was an idea I had for a while now. And if all the dialogue isn't right, or if there were some errors and if it was rushed, I am not the best when it comes to stories (especially dialogue). And for those who don't know, a baby dragon is actually called a whelp (did they ever call spike a whelp in the show? IDK). Anyways, I hope you like it.
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Comments: 214

dragonspikeexe In reply to ??? [2019-01-19 04:49:48 +0000 UTC]

Yep

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-19 05:03:54 +0000 UTC]

Oh. Haven't kept up with the show in a long time so idk who smolder is

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-19 05:04:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah shes the orange dragon

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-19 05:17:27 +0000 UTC]

I see

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-19 05:18:14 +0000 UTC]

And purple like Scootaloo

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-19 06:42:49 +0000 UTC]

Yes, I know. I looked her up.

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-19 12:17:53 +0000 UTC]

Weird right?

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-20 04:33:39 +0000 UTC]

eeyup

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-20 04:35:12 +0000 UTC]

Lol

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-20 05:24:01 +0000 UTC]

lol

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-20 13:27:54 +0000 UTC]

Don't forget Aria blaze and Starlight Glimmer

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-20 19:20:46 +0000 UTC]

True. They have no resemblance 

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-20 19:26:59 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I wonder who else look the same

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-20 19:40:22 +0000 UTC]

yea

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-20 20:11:55 +0000 UTC]

Yea

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-20 21:14:28 +0000 UTC]

???  

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-20 21:18:03 +0000 UTC]

....

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-21 01:40:42 +0000 UTC]

idk either tbh :/    

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-21 01:44:35 +0000 UTC]

....

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-21 01:45:37 +0000 UTC]

brb

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-21 01:48:27 +0000 UTC]

Ok that I know

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-21 02:04:17 +0000 UTC]

Back 

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-21 02:05:28 +0000 UTC]

Hey

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-21 02:07:09 +0000 UTC]

What?

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-21 03:37:21 +0000 UTC]

Your back

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-21 05:36:24 +0000 UTC]

oh yes

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-21 05:51:04 +0000 UTC]

Ok

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-22 03:27:53 +0000 UTC]

XD

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-22 03:35:48 +0000 UTC]

....

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-22 03:43:41 +0000 UTC]

.....

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-22 03:45:05 +0000 UTC]

Ok

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-22 04:12:53 +0000 UTC]

 

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-22 04:13:26 +0000 UTC]

Tear?

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-22 04:24:28 +0000 UTC]

No, just a water droplet

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-22 04:39:51 +0000 UTC]

Oh

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DubstepicDJ In reply to dragonspikeexe [2019-01-22 05:00:37 +0000 UTC]

yap

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dragonspikeexe In reply to DubstepicDJ [2019-01-22 12:02:04 +0000 UTC]

Ok

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BelladonnaErisMonroe In reply to ??? [2018-09-03 21:01:24 +0000 UTC]

i prefer draglings for baby dragons. and why does the one look more like a wing PUPPY then a dragon

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Colourstrike In reply to BelladonnaErisMonroe [2018-09-03 21:02:57 +0000 UTC]

I used the same ears Spike had as a puppy in Equestria Girls

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RaikouisAwesome In reply to ??? [2018-07-17 23:43:01 +0000 UTC]

This picture depicts a couple emotions when looking at it and memorizing it. The following emotions I knew : 
Discomfort
Sadness
Pain and even in some 
Anger 

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picclicker1 In reply to ??? [2018-06-11 23:47:50 +0000 UTC]

please make the baby dragon survive!Please.....I'm crying so much right now....

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WolfWarning In reply to picclicker1 [2018-06-12 00:16:43 +0000 UTC]

this isnt your characters so dont ask people to do things, also this was years ago

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samykhadre In reply to ??? [2018-02-26 23:08:05 +0000 UTC]

Maybe this Egg didn't get fertilized it's happen it's not necessarily dead...

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Spember4ever In reply to ??? [2017-11-16 13:53:42 +0000 UTC]

plz make a fanfic where the egg is saved plz

im in tears so plz make it happen

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Spember4ever In reply to ??? [2017-11-16 13:51:59 +0000 UTC]

im crying

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Spember4ever In reply to ??? [2017-11-16 13:51:49 +0000 UTC]

sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad

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Little-Magenta-XX In reply to ??? [2017-07-19 23:00:51 +0000 UTC]

In my mind...

When the egg was being buried, finally makes a movement as a spark of hope

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ColonelBSacquet In reply to Little-Magenta-XX [2017-07-21 15:02:18 +0000 UTC]

Aye. Same here.

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1llus10n17 In reply to ??? [2017-07-05 16:18:54 +0000 UTC]

Hey, I though in way to make a happy ending from this story, I hope you like it:
Spike was walking away with the egg still in his mouth, crying about he will do with the egg, although he suggested that was so sad about bury and leave his non-birth hatchling.
When he stopped put down the egg and make a little hole in the earth. After that he picked up the egg and looked it for a few seconds.
Spikesnif) Maybe I'll never see you again... but I'll always love you my child... always...
Then Spike put the egg in the hole and proceed to bury it, but when he let fall the earth on the egg, that earth shaked a little, and a little crack sound was heard.
Spike:Huh?
When Spike heard the crack his eyes opened wide, and fastly but carefully began to remove the earth and picked up the egg in his paws, the egg was beginning to crack in every sides, and then...
*CRACK*
A tiny paw was came out of the egg hole, and seconds later the egg was totally open, and Spike way astonished, was crying again but this time of joy...
The tiny dragon was a tiny dragoness, with violet scales and golden horns growing in her head and back, Spike get close her to him and checked her heartbeat and breathing, nothing anormal, nothing bad...
Then Spike heard a little moan from her, and saw something really beautiful, she was opening her eyes, and was red crimson-color like Ember. Spike now was crying more of joy, and with no lose more time, hugged his new daughter carefully and flied back to his family.
Ember was beginning to worry, Spike was taking a lot to came back and the sun was dissapearing fast in the horizon.
Ember:Why is he taking a lot? Maybe something happened? Maybe...
Ember felt a little pull in her paw, looked down and saw one of her children looking at her with worry. Maybe the hatchling noticed the absence of the father and was worried too.
Emberon't worry my son, your father will come back soon...
Then Ember heard the sound of shaking wings and saw to the way where Spike went, and saw him flying fast to her, what she noticed about Spike was he was crying, the tears falling from his mouth.
Ember began to worry more until saw what he was smiling, now the curiosity was killing her...
When Spike landed in front of Ember, the hatchlings come near to him, and Ember saw what Spike was hugging something.
Ember:Spike... What happened...?
Spike:Ember... You was right...
Ember:Right...? About... what?
Spike:Its beautiful...
Then Spike showed her what he was hugging, Ember gasped what she saw, she can't believe it...
Ember:Spike... is... is...
Spikesmiling) Yes... she is...
Ember:She... when...?
Spike:When I was about to bury the egg, began to shake, and happened...
Ember picked her new daughter and saw her beautiful eyes, the happiness she was feeling now was unexplainable...
She began to cry, letting fall tears of joy and hugging her new hatchling for what happened, their egg survived, and when they was giving up hope, a miracle happened.
Soon the hatchlings saw their mother crying and wanted to comfort her.
Ember:Come here my pride... I want to show you someone...
Then Ember showed to her hatchlings their new sibling, the tiny dragons watched at her amazed, the new born hatchling looked up at them and let out a small laugh, causing everyone smile at that.
Spike:Sorry Ember, I guess I lost the hope too soon instead of believe more in you...
Ember:No Spike... You just was doing it to make me feel better... And now I can't feel more happy like now... But... how happened?
Spike:... Maybe was love...
Ember:Love?
Spike:Yes, your love for her was so strong, like my love for you, and that love made this miracle.
Ember then looked to allí his hatchlings and smiled to them, and to Spike too. Spike in answer kissed her, and she returned the kiss.
Spike:I love you Ember.
Ember:I love you too Spike.
Spike and Ember looked at their children and picked them up and put them in a family hug.
Spike:And we love you all with all our heart.
Ember:And we will love you forever, no matter what.
The hatchlings hugged them too, also the newborn, finally the family was complete, the love can make miracles after all.
-THE END-
I hope you liked this.

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Xenomorph566 In reply to 1llus10n17 [2021-11-19 09:30:17 +0000 UTC]

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