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Published: 2014-01-23 19:52:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 81408; Favourites: 1408; Downloads: 413
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Created with the inkpad app for iPad.
mlp:fim (c) Lauren and Hasbro,
art by me.
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I still wonder if the ponies in equestria actually graze like normal equines. It's just something silly to think about They do eat flowers,though, so why not. I'm not really proud of the background in this one. Mostly backgrounds isn't really my thing to do but I really disliked it this time Ah..well, can't be perfect. At least it has my two favorite characters in it (I just love applejack) ____________________________________ I'm open for critiques again. If you feel like giving critiques to my comic then please feel free to do so. Should I do something better or do I totally suck. I leave it all up to you. Thank you. Master Brohoof!!!
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Comments: 368
Because I don't have anything else to say.
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You're very welcome.
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Mow Mow Mow your lawn, right there by the stream; right here, we all must cheer, Derpy's finally on the team!
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Well, it's like eating something raw vs. eating something prepared by a cook; it tastes better in the way it's prepared.
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This is a pretty good analogy for bottled water
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dear dear Rarity... I love you all the same... ^_^
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I think you did a great job on this comic and I believe Rarity's hair style in panel 2 and Applejack's red neckerchief blend in really naturally with the characters,
so much so, that I didn't even notice Applejack wearing it at first
It's definitely good, that you took a step back from your older, more show-like comics and developed you own style
and I really like how you do the eyes, even though I would suggest you to draw the irises a little bit smaller at times,
for example in Rarity's left eye in panel 1.
Also, I think it would be better if you'd step down on the amount of Rarity's eyelashes
and only keep the longer ones on the upper half of her eyes, cause it looks a bit odd otherwise.
Overall though, I think you've improved a lot. Keep up the good work
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Thank you so much for the hint/tips and all the compliments.
Il keep that all in mind for my future work.
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I've been paying 100 bits to eat something that grows on the dirty ground?!
rarity, you're a animal, get in touch with your natural instincts.... now shutup and eat your grass.
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I already say it but I'll say it again I LOVE THOSES FREAKIN EYES !!!!!!!
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Thanks XD
It's always nice to hear that, even if you already mentioned it before.
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Hehehe ! always ready to bring da smile ! pinkie seys !
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Save on bits & travel, just stop, drop, & nom.
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Derpy instantly gives +∞Cuteness to whatever art she's in.
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You're getting better at the eyes--a lot less uncanny valley now.
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Thanks a lot^_^
Uncanny valley, had no idea what that meant. Had to look it up XD
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Rarity is going to starve to death now! XD
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This is why Rarity is secretly a human and not Lyra. XD
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Pffft~ Oh Rarity! 
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XD thanks
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Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah
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Or better yet... Crabgrass!
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It's weird when i was around 5 i had a thing about eating grass..What? it's yummy
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Don't worry I did that too XD
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Lol 
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The tower of pimps easter egg was glorious. Kudos on that and the great comic overall!
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