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comatose-comet β Friends, without benefits
Published: 2014-07-03 02:00:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 769; Favourites: 29; Downloads: 0
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we are not friends,friends donβt share
one heart, one mouth.
and friends walk in parallel lines,
brushing knuckles not
hipbones and I keep wishing
on the shooting stars
splintering in your eyes for us to be
friends but each time you sigh into my shoulder
how you need this, how you need
me, somehow it almost seems enough,
it almost seems like we are more
than friends but darling -
we are not friends, not even close
and we are not more or
less we just
are.
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Comments: 22
I like the line breaks and the length.
I read the linebreaks as having something behind them that couldn't be put into words. It works quite well, looking at it in that way.
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thank you so much 
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Oh, I love this idea. I feel like this can be read in many different ways, and it's still so beautiful!
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The length is sharp and clean in my opinion. Particularly liked the break at darling, the last line as "are" and the visuals (walking in parallel lines and brushing knuckles not hipbones )
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Great emotion behind it. The broken up sentence towards the end added to the effect it gave off!
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thank you - I debated it for a while but I like how it's broken up too
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This is really good. I really like the ending and how you break up the sentences. It flows really nicely
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I hope that's a good thing!
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