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Published: 2016-07-02 18:24:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 2337; Favourites: 49; Downloads: 6
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Description This is a remake of my most popular pic:

I never quite liked the old pic so i choose to remake it in a new way that I would hopefully like more, this is the result of that. Loads of edeting and some better posing, but I have however discovered the main reason to why I did not like the original. This is so edgy that I think I broke a finger... AW.


This was made over the course of a series of livestreams:     

I will make a speed-up version of the editing soon. I would have added it to this pic but it takes longer than I realized so it will be some time before you can see that.


PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK IF THIS!!!!!!!
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Made with Garry's Mod edited with Photoshop Elements
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Comments: 31

Cheezeburgah [2016-07-02 20:20:31 +0000 UTC]

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Impact


Alright, Sorry to be a harsh critic but their's quite a lot wrong with this picture.

To start off, the posing on Christian Brutal Sniper's hands is very awkward. The left hand bent at a stiff, unnatural angle. I'm aware that some physics models are very limited in terms of fluidness but you could of done it a bit better.

The second problem is probably the fact that the scenery is rather bland, just him standing in a somewhat bare room with weapons floating. Again, I understand that having a "rack" or shelf for every weapon may have lagged the game but again. It's awkward and unnatural.

Finally, I find major problems with the darkness of the artwork and the over-exposed red colouration on everything in sight that isn't a solid black.

All in all, In my personal (somewhat harsh) opinion. This is a slight "downgrade" to the original with awkward posing, Bland scenery and fuckfest of blood red. I understand if you take this the wrong way but I am only giving this critique so you may improve on your 'mistakes' in the near future. Also the ratings are a fuckfest because I don't have any idea what half of these mean, god dammit.

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commanderjonas In reply to Cheezeburgah [2016-07-06 11:10:15 +0000 UTC]

I personally prefer this one because it looks better and it is less dark... And if you ask me the red lighting is way better than the dark posting effect of the previous picture.

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tigerfaceswe [2016-07-06 10:30:25 +0000 UTC]

*licks*
www.youtube.com/watch?v=asKLGx…

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commanderjonas In reply to tigerfaceswe [2016-07-07 16:14:10 +0000 UTC]

I thought it would taste like metal.... And stegosaurus.

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FosterBonnie [2016-07-04 08:57:50 +0000 UTC]

Holy shit the red filter is more hell than my [SFM] SWORDBLADE: Code-614 crap xd

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commanderjonas In reply to FosterBonnie [2016-07-07 16:12:57 +0000 UTC]

Well.... I still prefer it over the old one... It was really dark.

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DeekirbyDeeL [2016-07-03 16:38:02 +0000 UTC]

Awesome

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commanderjonas In reply to DeekirbyDeeL [2016-07-07 16:12:27 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks

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elfmoon3 [2016-07-03 16:05:31 +0000 UTC]

There he is 

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commanderjonas In reply to elfmoon3 [2016-07-07 16:11:50 +0000 UTC]

Indeed 

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elfmoon3 In reply to commanderjonas [2016-07-08 05:57:23 +0000 UTC]

Eeeyup the psychotic Australian sniper with the diet of a cannibal is back baby

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BurgerFeller [2016-07-03 14:34:43 +0000 UTC]

He looks more deranged than usual.
'S a good one, right here, matey.

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commanderjonas In reply to BurgerFeller [2016-07-07 16:13:35 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks


Glad you are enjoying it

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GMODSFMROCKS [2016-07-03 13:32:30 +0000 UTC]

so
much
blades

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commanderjonas In reply to GMODSFMROCKS [2016-07-07 16:10:28 +0000 UTC]

Would you expect it to be different?

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GMODSFMROCKS In reply to commanderjonas [2016-07-07 20:31:05 +0000 UTC]

nope

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commanderjonas In reply to GMODSFMROCKS [2016-07-10 15:49:32 +0000 UTC]

Good.

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ToxicHolyGrenade [2016-07-02 20:22:14 +0000 UTC]

Eww, stop licking blood off your knife boy! XD

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commanderjonas In reply to ToxicHolyGrenade [2016-07-03 08:36:02 +0000 UTC]

I am not sure that he cares about the blood on the knife. I think he actually likes it.

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ToxicHolyGrenade In reply to commanderjonas [2016-07-03 11:54:31 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I know.

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heae [2016-07-02 18:44:10 +0000 UTC]

Henry:'' i like you.''

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commanderjonas In reply to heae [2016-07-03 08:35:01 +0000 UTC]

Who is henry?

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heae In reply to commanderjonas [2016-07-03 08:41:55 +0000 UTC]

an OC of mine

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commanderjonas In reply to heae [2016-07-16 20:31:44 +0000 UTC]

Ah... Well, guess he would like a deranged serial killer with a room full of blades that is used to cut people into little peaces.

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heae In reply to commanderjonas [2016-07-16 20:59:50 +0000 UTC]

kinda

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Pr0der [2016-07-02 18:28:21 +0000 UTC]

*3* so many blades!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i want them i want them all

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commanderjonas In reply to Pr0der [2016-07-03 08:34:41 +0000 UTC]

Well.... Good luck getting past that guy

He seams to guard it very well.

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Pr0der In reply to commanderjonas [2016-07-03 08:36:33 +0000 UTC]

Well i can try it >:3

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commanderjonas In reply to Pr0der [2016-07-03 08:37:00 +0000 UTC]

Good luck pal... You will need it

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Atlasuir [2016-07-02 18:26:48 +0000 UTC]

That, my good sir, is still quite a lot of weapons...

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commanderjonas In reply to Atlasuir [2016-07-03 08:34:00 +0000 UTC]

Well..... It is CBS, what where you expecting otherwise?

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