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Published: 2016-10-25 03:40:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 541; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description AlRIGHT! Here's our cute former-giraffe, current-cow. Just wanted a cow character since her as a giraffe didn't make sense since she didn't have a long neck. She has truly been revamped a few times before, but I am now content with this design. Alright, here goes. This is a very old drawing but I had waited until now because I didn't have a backstory that would connect with all the others' stories. Anyways, here is her backstory!

Honey was born with special psychic powers,making her a clairvoyant. While she had the power to know what she had to do in order to succeed in life, she did not use it for that. She wanted to forge her own path, whether it was the right way to success or not. With time, she became an online model, wearing her own designs. It was not a pretty big fame, and whatever she made by selling her stuff was not enough to pay for her amenities or wants and needs.

One day, she was commissioned by a restaurateur whose wife owned various chains of diners and restaurants for new maid outfit designs. Of course she had accepted, having plenty knowledge on this man's wife and her businesses. Also, she was currently in a rut money-wise, and she needed the money. It wasn't until she had to personally met the maid team that Honey became intrigued in that particular business. As she was measuring the girls, she kept asking what they did, how they felt, and what the perks were of being an idol maid. With every answer she received, she became more and more interested in becoming one. 

After she was done, she went to the man to ask (and receive payment) about any job opportunities he currently had. He told her that she would be welcome to join the small team, seeing as she would be a good addition. Honey talked a bit more with him about terms and stuff, and finally agreed to work for his wife. She went to introduce herself once more to the other girls, and told them she'd be working alongside them from now on, which included making their costumes. They were very happy to hear that, and asked if she wanted to live with them in the apartment they both currently lived in since it was too big for only two girls. Even if it was only two bedrooms, it was a huge place. Honey accepted, seeing as how there would be no point in living apart from them if they all worked at the same place. Apart from working as a maid, she still makes costumes for events at the cafe, and gets commissioned on the side for other people. 


Name: Honey
Age: 20
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Gender: Female
Species: White highland cow
Birthdate: April 8
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Comments: 5

StripedLoser [2016-10-25 03:48:40 +0000 UTC]

Hey,I was wondering if you would mind me giving a critique? I really like her but I there are some things that Im not to fond of.

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CommanderNiko In reply to StripedLoser [2016-10-25 04:28:00 +0000 UTC]

Sure, I don't mind

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StripedLoser In reply to CommanderNiko [2016-10-26 00:03:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, im sorry if I seem rude I just think this character has a lot of potential! First I would like to say I love her base design. The white and tan really go together well and I enjoy how the shirt brings a deepish bright pop. What I dont think goes well is the shirt with the purple hair and bright green eyes. Maybe changing the hair color to a brownish or more tan color. That way it goes better with the skin and it fits the other colors well.
Second is the backstory. Umm im kinda confused why she was a psychic in her past. It doesnt really seem to be necessary to the rest of the backstory, and I would recommend either getting rid of that part ( if its not necessary to your story) Or shorting it to a small mentioning (if its necessary to your story). Also im confused on why the restaurant owners husband is the one paying her and hiring her unless he was the manager or co-owner.
Again im really sorry if I sound mean I just feel like this character could be so good! Anyways thank you for your time!

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CommanderNiko In reply to StripedLoser [2016-10-26 01:16:35 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry about it, if anything I appreciate it! Before this final design, her hair was purple, but a much brighter one. I decided to change it to what it is right now because it's more to my liking. The sweater shirt IS a big bright, huh? But I don't usually go with the whole cartoon thing that I make them wear the same thing every time I draw them, and I doubt I'll draw her again with that shirt (maybe just change the colour! Haha). I draw them with different outfits, if applicable, every time so that their personality could be further understood! It would give people I'm having an art trade with to further understand what kind of outfits my characters would wear~

About the psychic part, it aaaall dates back to when I first made her. It's got an emotional attachment to that part. Older viewers of mine would be able to remember when reading this haha. Although I REALLY know where you're coming from (trust me, I also stopped and deleted that part a couple times for the same reason) I just couldn't get rid of it x) There are certain characters I have to revamp and that will fit perfectly with her psychic nature, so don't worry about it!

Once again, I deeply thank you for your critique. Don't be sorry of sounding mean! Not that it did, I like knowing others' views and perspective of my stuff. I appreciate it!

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StripedLoser In reply to CommanderNiko [2016-10-28 03:28:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh ok! I do really like when outfits change and it makes alot of sense. xD Ya I keep somethings with my oldest characters. Ok, just wanted to make sure it fit with your story. Thank you, I just get kinda nervous talking to anyone xD. No problem at all I really did enjoy this character!

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