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compgrokker — Atonement [NSFW]
Published: 2004-11-14 18:41:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 75; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description worthless piece of shit
sick twisted motherfucker
attention whore
much to atone for...

sins of my past come back to haunt me,
the sins of today shadow my mind,
though i choose my sins carefully
to make it worth my while.
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Comments: 10

Skull-Crow [2004-11-15 07:27:47 +0000 UTC]

hmm, very nice, has a great sound, i can sing it, more like a song than a poem, needs more thought, but as a poem its very good.

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compgrokker In reply to Skull-Crow [2004-11-15 07:39:08 +0000 UTC]

I'm not sure if it's totally, done. Mostly (like all my poems) I'm stuck. I lost the feel of the poem. I do strive to write songs, I just can't write music at the moment. I'm learning, tho....

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Skull-Crow In reply to compgrokker [2004-11-16 04:14:33 +0000 UTC]

good, keep learning, who knows, maybe youll be famous one day.

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compgrokker In reply to Skull-Crow [2004-11-16 16:22:07 +0000 UTC]

Maybe. Or infamous. *evil grin*

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Skull-Crow In reply to compgrokker [2004-11-16 17:18:55 +0000 UTC]

dont be too nuaghty.

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Skull-Crow In reply to compgrokker [2004-11-16 17:18:53 +0000 UTC]

dont be too nuaghty.

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compgrokker In reply to Skull-Crow [2004-11-17 16:02:30 +0000 UTC]

Why not? It's fun being naughty. *evil grin*

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Skull-Crow In reply to compgrokker [2004-11-17 16:21:28 +0000 UTC]

lol, yeah i know, lol.

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Burheytoe [2004-11-14 23:05:16 +0000 UTC]

I am one with the first stanza, victim of the second.

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compgrokker In reply to Burheytoe [2004-11-15 21:31:50 +0000 UTC]

Heh. Yeah...

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