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Where Monday is Wednesday,And Wednesday is June,
Where confusion is imminent,
When brain like baboon,
Where spelling is terribel,
And things seem much worse,
Where the rich man hates his beloved purse.
Where children are crying,
And dark skies fade black.
Where there's an awful moment,
And it just keeps playing back.
When you capture a view,
And then sketch out a curse.
My foes - I tell you,
That, is a verse.
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"When you capture a view,
And then sketch out a curse.
My foes - I tell you,
That, is a verse."
Very true, i'm not sure how you intended it, but it very aptly describes what is required.
I keep going back and reading it, there's something about it, I don't know what though. The words captivated my attention and I found it sounds best when i say it outloud, with quite a bit of pace. It's a shame that this hasn't been seen as much as your other stuff.
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wow! i love this
i love how you spelled terrible wrong...hehe.
great idea!
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Very nice. I love the lilt to it, it really draws the reader to the next line and to keep reading. The "nonsense" also lends very well to the poem. Hmm... I've got a poem that's all nonsense, too... maybe one of these days I'll put some of my writing on DA. Until then, I'll just enjoy your writing and others like you.
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