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GotchiCat [2010-06-07 06:24:26 +0000 UTC]

this is really pretty, I love the blend of colours

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BlackInfinity666 [2010-06-05 14:45:20 +0000 UTC]

very nice. good shading dear~

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kirakuro [2010-03-28 14:29:34 +0000 UTC]

ECKK!!wat mistake(s) oh??got la a bit only but its not a disappointment!INILAH SUDAH UPDATE!!
the face expression very nice o. i dunno how you do it but i can NEVER draw that kind of face expression!! aih...very nice xDD
:thumbs up thumbs up:
xDDDDD

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animevenus93 [2010-03-25 10:05:45 +0000 UTC]

GRRR Watcha talking about!
I love it!
I love how you colored it!
So awesome!

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misterquark [2010-03-21 04:48:48 +0000 UTC]

This is really good! Just a few (quite petty) things: You might want to emphasise her waist on the left-hand side a little more, even though it's a three-quarter view. Also, her ear is a little pointed at the top, and her neck goes very sharply into her collarbone, it could be a little smoother? I know they're really small things (everything major you have already noticed or has been said), and overall, it's great. I really like the detail, like the pinstripes and her watch. The shading is fab, and I think you really got the mouth. (Which is impressive, because that's hard).

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unUnderstandablE [2010-03-21 02:08:00 +0000 UTC]

I'd really like to give you a good constuctive critic but everyone here has done so for me but, it's really improving a lot and I like the colours as well as your clothing designs..
Good Job!!

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sunsetzero [2010-03-20 08:30:57 +0000 UTC]

Her upper body is good. In fact, it's so good that when you scroll down, you can see the mistake. Her hip is nudged to the left, and I think her legs are too skinny. Maybe move them to the right, and it'll be fine .

I'm not gonna repeat what ~ElvanBeauty said, we have the same thing in mind.

I like the shines on the right part. There's like a flash of light behind her. Not to mention the overall expression and pose. The "Hesitant" theme is really obvious.

Good job!

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ElvanBeauty [2010-03-20 05:21:12 +0000 UTC]

I'd just like to say that despite any mistakes, this is a be-oooootiful piece. <3 However, some spots that I noticed that are unfortunately making the whole thing look a bit off are:

1) You have more than enough hair on the left side, but I think it's missing a bit on the right side. 'Cause the head would be a bit fuller.

2) The entire skirt, legs 'n' all, would probably look better if you moved them over to the right a bit. Also, since the torso is especially elongated (and really pretty that way! ), the skirt could be longer and the pockets would most likely not be visible.

3) Really, really minor thing, but I'll say it anyways. Usually, the crook of the arm is positioned just where the torso curves in - that's what I've found from experience anyways.

Now, to make up for the nitpicky-ness above:

1) I love the sepia coloring, however you did that. It's wonderful.

2) You say the eyes are strange, but I think they are beautiful.

3) Your creases in the clothes and shading are extraordinary! Better than I can do.

4) Ohoho, and I just noticed how you signed your name at the edge of her shirt. Creative!

~ElvanBeauty

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saraxara [2010-03-20 05:17:12 +0000 UTC]

heyy this is nice!! 8DD i'm liking the colours xDD

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puresnowart [2010-03-20 05:11:11 +0000 UTC]

Whoaa, I love how you drew this the shading is very nice and the anatomy looks great to me :]

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