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Published: 2014-09-29 15:23:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 773; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Not much happens, but I did decide to do a little more on J.R.'s character. He's already fun to write about. I always wondered why, unlike other rivals, he doesn't come all the way with you to see your starter. So, here's my reason (might do an extra on that...)Also, first proper attempt at far off backgrounds. I doubt this is what can be seen when you look at the observatory bit in Aspertia, but I was doing this from memory. It's...a bit bland isn't it. Additionally, the grey bits in the last three panels of 1.5 are supposed to be stairs. Yeah...I have a long way to go with my drawing skills.
Anyway, next Tolkie meets Bianca. This will be fun Β .
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ACottontail [2025-04-08 23:25:35 +0000 UTC]
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confusedkangaroo In reply to ACottontail [2025-04-09 09:32:36 +0000 UTC]
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wastelander-nick [2024-07-16 05:58:52 +0000 UTC]
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confusedkangaroo In reply to wastelander-nick [2024-07-16 12:44:38 +0000 UTC]
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confusedkangaroo In reply to novamallow [2016-08-14 06:25:42 +0000 UTC]
I keep confusing people, sorry! The top left panel, then all the panels in that vertical column. Then up to the top right panel and down that column. All dialogue should be read from left to right in each panel. I did it this way to emulate 4 panel comics/mangas.
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JustSewaddlingAway [2015-01-07 12:29:52 +0000 UTC]
J.R. likes to observe you, don't you get it?
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confusedkangaroo In reply to JustSewaddlingAway [2015-01-07 13:02:11 +0000 UTC]
It becomes clearer in an extra I did, but J.R. wants to observe Tolkie getting her first PokΓ©mon simply because she's getting it from Bianca. He wants an excuse not to make contact with people who wear glasses!
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NameMcNameFace [2014-12-03 16:02:20 +0000 UTC]
interesting so far but your drawings look a bit pale sometimes... it's hard to see...
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confusedkangaroo In reply to NameMcNameFace [2014-12-03 16:51:10 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I noticed that. I've been playing around with colours and making the lines darker, but its a work in progress. I also tried darkening the scanned image. It looked...more messed up... At least the story's interesting!
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confusedkangaroo In reply to FerGarcia220 [2014-09-29 17:55:05 +0000 UTC]
Not the next page, the next one after. Yeah...it is a little drawn out at the moment. I just need to get Bianca out of the way, but feel free to guess which one I'll pick!
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FerGarcia220 In reply to confusedkangaroo [2014-09-29 17:59:31 +0000 UTC]
I dunno. Snivy?
Oh, and I posted the rest of Chapter 2's pages. Feel free to check.
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confusedkangaroo In reply to FerGarcia220 [2014-09-29 18:39:12 +0000 UTC]
Cool, will do. And one vote for Snivy! (I've already completed the game, it's so hard not to blub out the answer!)
Thanks for the comment, I do appreciate them! This is my first try trying a whole comic, so I'm still trying to find my feet.
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FerGarcia220 In reply to confusedkangaroo [2014-09-29 18:53:26 +0000 UTC]
This is also my first time making a whole comic.
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confusedkangaroo In reply to FerGarcia220 [2014-09-29 19:05:22 +0000 UTC]
At least I'm not on my own...You're one is a lot better than mine, and you're getting your pages done quicker. Feel proud!
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