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Published: 2018-07-26 00:07:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 839; Favourites: 24; Downloads: 0
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After doing some doodles and getting some constructive criticism on it, I decided to try and make a piece with Xj9 (in my style). Let's hope that I'm moving forward. This time though this drawing is digital rather than traditional, like the doodles. I'm trying to get better at digital art.Here are the doodles that started it all: www.deviantart.com/connecting-…
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Can I just say how much I love this piece? The colours are all very nice and go well together. It gives off a kind of "retro" vibe, which by the looks of it is what you were going for! Good job on that! However, I think the anatomy is very nice but the hand that is in the air looks a bit off. Since the rest of the drawing is very angular, I suggest next time draw her hand in an angular way to keep everything stylized the way you would like it to be. This may just be part of your art-style, though. I would've finished my criticism here but as I looked a bit harder, the right arm looks kinda weird because it starts in one place and judging on the angle of the little piece of arm visible under the head, it would be coming out somewhere else (which is an issue I have too and its fixable by drawing the arm through the head in the sketch). This is a very good piece of art and I could stare at it for a while and ramble about everything you did right. Good job dude !!
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Honestly, I debated not posting this because of things like that with the anatomy and the hand deal. Anyway, Thanks and yeah I'll try working on things like that more.
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Thanks! May she continue to fly in reruns.
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Yeah that would be great <3
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Oh, Thank you.
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