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Published: 2008-06-05 01:44:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 1645; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 21
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Round 1! FIGHT!Well, not -quite- yet. The folowing pages'll have more action that you can shake a stick at, but I felt this'd be a nice little set-up for you guys, right? My first match in the Colosseum, is a cage match fight with El Toro against the tag team of Sabine [link] and Wendigo [link] , two awesome-looking characters, I must say. I just hope I do them justice!
As a side note, I learned-ed how to makes electricities! Yay!
Sabine and Wendigo are (c) Buuya
Jim and Bob are (c) Kilojara
...Who wants to give Bob a hug?
El Toro's profile: [link]
Prelude: [link]
Round 1, Page 1: (You are here)
Round 1, Page 2: [link]
Round 1, Page 3: [link]
Round 1, Page 4: [link]
Round 1, Page 5: [link]
Round 2, Vs. Sol Thundard: [link]
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Comments: 25
I like how, across the board, Bob's given sort of a deadpan --- noun.
Actually having the match in a cage, and being creative with said cage, might have been what helped you win, I figure.
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Well, the cage had been a requirement of the match, so I thought I might as well have fun with it. all that electricity was a pain in the butt, though!
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Course, the other side didn't have a cage, did they?
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True, Buuya used a pit instead of a cage...
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Man, this looks cool! Love the little nuances ("Kid at Christmas", "Number one mug", and "Happy to be here".) Good luck, El Toro!
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I love making little jokes in my writing, so it's good to see someone appreciates them! ^^
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awesome start! i'm really impressed by your innovations to the cage match idea! this'll be awesome C8
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Thankya! The whole electro-cage thing jsut came to me, thought I'd spice things up a little.
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Haha oh man. That panda saying 'I'm excited as a kid at christmas' with that expression just made my day XD
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Yeah, when I saw Kilo's depiction of Bob, I just knew he'd be the kind to drip sarcasm without breaking a grin.
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DUUUDE!
This is exciting. I am excited.
Panda announcer <3
Just, happiness. Like, I know this ends with my arse getting served up on a platter, but still. Happiness.
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Aw, don't worry, Buuya! I promise not to spank 'em -too- badly! Just enough.
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THAT wasn't in the original rulebook!
But since there's nothing against it, GO FOR IT!! :evil laugh:
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Whoot. Cant wait for the fight to get started. *dons her cheerleader outfit* n_n
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I'm thinking of furryness combined with celebrity deathmatch when seeing this. And also when reading the announcers their words..
This'll be a blast. Or at least, touching those bars will be.
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It appears to me, that Bob wasn't hugged a lot as a child...
AND WOW ELECTRO CAGE! XD I had no idea. I thought it was going to look crude and low tech, like copper entwined with iron bars. But you went for the glosssy, super conductor look. :3
I nunno, though: Its hard to see with all that glare. Maybe turn down the voltage a bit so the audience can see inside?
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*psst* The glare helps cover my complete lack of detail on characetrs that tiny! Don't tell! But don't worry, the bars won't be covering up anything. They'll play a background role, now. Mostly. Maybe.
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The announcers are so cheesy that I believe they are real! XD
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I've had too many roommates that loved watching pro-wrestling. I guess listening to all those announcers rubbed off on me!
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Good start there. You sure captured their... er... cheerfulness. ;>
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Jose's caused that reaction before, yes.
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