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ConstantlyRandom — 'Hit the breaks' by-nc-nd

Published: 2007-10-27 20:22:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 510; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 13
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Description My turn to die;;

I asked you once and you've rejected
Am I not good enough? Please tell me why
I told you I loved you , but your heart is unaffected
I gave my life to you, and still no reply?!
My goal to impress you was surely defected
the train will be here in a blink of an eye
you are my first love; & you will be my last
becuase now is my turn to die©.



Editing & Poem By Me ©
Thankyou~UAE-TeaRs-1993 for the picture~
Go easy on me I wrote this poem on the spot
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Comments: 19

DxBCanDY [2008-03-11 06:18:47 +0000 UTC]

I really luved the words ....
itz so awwwwwwwwwwwwwww of u ....
hehe

well... my plan is to hv one ... nd only one in my life .. but HELL i aint gna die for him ... lo0o0o00lz ....

u keep it up cookie ...

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ConstantlyRandom In reply to DxBCanDY [2008-03-11 09:58:54 +0000 UTC]

Lmao, Thanks ;; Well kinda me too, I'ma not guna die for a dude, no matter who he is XD .. I just wrote this poem on the spot o match the picture -- Thanks alot hun' ;D *hugs*

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weserneo [2007-12-19 13:23:18 +0000 UTC]

hey great pic! cant say i have ever thought of suicide, but whenever i get to the top of a cliff i have the urge to jump off it! thankfully the only times i actually jump is when there is deep water or a rope stopping me from getting hurt!

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ConstantlyRandom In reply to weserneo [2007-12-19 14:08:02 +0000 UTC]

yeah like ur awsme picture I loved them!

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weserneo In reply to ConstantlyRandom [2007-12-19 14:18:10 +0000 UTC]

thank you! its soo much fun!

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ConstantlyRandom In reply to weserneo [2007-12-19 14:30:08 +0000 UTC]

yeah I bet it is .. bt Im affraid of hights so.. Really I get dizzy just looking at the pic!

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CreativeClick [2007-11-14 15:11:10 +0000 UTC]

Wow.. !
Mashalla i Loved The Pic ..<3

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ConstantlyRandom In reply to CreativeClick [2007-11-19 16:53:48 +0000 UTC]

thaaaanks

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CreativeClick In reply to ConstantlyRandom [2007-11-21 11:37:54 +0000 UTC]


Your welcome

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UAE-TeaRs-1993 [2007-11-09 20:45:22 +0000 UTC]

WooW , I-CAnT-AmagiNe-That-My-Picture-Is-Gona-Be-So-Nice-Like-This-!!
Thanx-Alot-Siso0o-!!
I-Like-That-PoeM-(WayeeeD-RakBEeeh)

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ConstantlyRandom In reply to UAE-TeaRs-1993 [2007-11-19 16:53:22 +0000 UTC]

Thaaaaanks ! ^^

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UAE-TeaRs-1993 In reply to ConstantlyRandom [2007-11-21 07:51:58 +0000 UTC]

Ur Wellcome ! ^^

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Gokiburogal [2007-10-27 20:25:37 +0000 UTC]

I used to think that way, too.
but love came and it will come to you as well. it always does at last. try not to give up :*

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ConstantlyRandom In reply to Gokiburogal [2007-10-27 20:32:09 +0000 UTC]

Well I used to feel this way but not anymore, but I wrote this poem just now its just based on the pic...
anyways thanks so much for the advice^^

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mimoriXamaya [2007-10-27 20:24:25 +0000 UTC]

oh wow that is so sad. T-T

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ConstantlyRandom In reply to mimoriXamaya [2007-10-27 20:25:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much

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mimoriXamaya In reply to ConstantlyRandom [2007-10-27 20:26:51 +0000 UTC]

your welcome. I love the poem and the picture they are pure angst at its best.

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ConstantlyRandom In reply to mimoriXamaya [2007-10-27 20:42:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks thanks , thats so sweet of you to say

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mimoriXamaya In reply to ConstantlyRandom [2007-10-28 03:44:29 +0000 UTC]

your welcome.

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