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Published: 2007-10-27 20:22:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 510; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 13
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My turn to die;;I asked you once and you've rejected
Am I not good enough? Please tell me why
I told you I loved you , but your heart is unaffected
I gave my life to you, and still no reply?!
My goal to impress you was surely defected
the train will be here in a blink of an eye
you are my first love; & you will be my last
becuase now is my turn to die©.
Editing & Poem By Me ©
Thankyou~UAE-TeaRs-1993 for the picture~
Go easy on me I wrote this poem on the spot
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Comments: 19
DxBCanDY [2008-03-11 06:18:47 +0000 UTC]
I really luved the words ....
itz so awwwwwwwwwwwwwww of u ....
hehe
well... my plan is to hv one ... nd only one in my life .. but HELL i aint gna die for him ... lo0o0o00lz ....
u keep it up cookie ...
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ConstantlyRandom In reply to DxBCanDY [2008-03-11 09:58:54 +0000 UTC]
Lmao, Thanks ;; Well kinda me too, I'ma not guna die for a dude, no matter who he is XD .. I just wrote this poem on the spot o match the picture
-- Thanks alot hun' ;D *hugs*
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weserneo [2007-12-19 13:23:18 +0000 UTC]
hey great pic! cant say i have ever thought of suicide, but whenever i get to the top of a cliff i have the urge to jump off it! thankfully the only times i actually jump is when there is deep water or a rope stopping me from getting hurt!
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ConstantlyRandom In reply to weserneo [2007-12-19 14:08:02 +0000 UTC]
yeah like ur awsme picture I loved them!
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weserneo In reply to ConstantlyRandom [2007-12-19 14:18:10 +0000 UTC]
thank you! its soo much fun!
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ConstantlyRandom In reply to weserneo [2007-12-19 14:30:08 +0000 UTC]
yeah I bet it is .. bt Im affraid of hights so.. Really I get dizzy just looking at the pic!
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UAE-TeaRs-1993 [2007-11-09 20:45:22 +0000 UTC]
WooW , I-CAnT-AmagiNe-That-My-Picture-Is-Gona-Be-So-Nice-Like-This-!!
Thanx-Alot-Siso0o-!!
I-Like-That-PoeM-(WayeeeD-RakBEeeh)
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UAE-TeaRs-1993 In reply to ConstantlyRandom [2007-11-21 07:51:58 +0000 UTC]
Ur Wellcome ! ^^
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Gokiburogal [2007-10-27 20:25:37 +0000 UTC]
I used to think that way, too.
but love came and it will come to you as well. it always does at last. try not to give up :*
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ConstantlyRandom In reply to Gokiburogal [2007-10-27 20:32:09 +0000 UTC]
Well I used to feel this way but not anymore, but I wrote this poem just now its just based on the pic...
anyways thanks so much for the advice^^
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mimoriXamaya In reply to ConstantlyRandom [2007-10-27 20:26:51 +0000 UTC]
your welcome. I love the poem and the picture they are pure angst at its best.
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ConstantlyRandom In reply to mimoriXamaya [2007-10-27 20:42:02 +0000 UTC]
thanks thanks , thats so sweet of you to say
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