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Published: 2009-10-09 22:48:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 3039; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 15
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Ok, so I've been doing this picture for about 2 and a half months on and off and I cant do it no more! This pic has been a battle of determination, sometimes I look at it and think 'yeah I like that' then I look at it again and think 'no, dont like that at all'.
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As I said above this pic has been a struggle, I'm not normally this daring with the angle and I would kinda just like a constructive overhaul on it! But I appreciate that's a lot to ask!
So I would be grateful for any suggestions on the following;
Lighting
Composition
Did I manage to create any depth
Is the picture too busy
Does it work as a whole
Thank you
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So delicate! Even it's a bit blurry. I like the perspective and girl's hair. Waving material makes a real feeling of wind
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Thank you very much! 
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There could be more depth in it; maybe it would help to put one (ore even more) sharper leaf in the foreground.
cheers
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Thanks for the feedback, I'll give that a go!
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It surely is an eye-catcher with all those things and colors. Actually I think there is too much going on in the picture, it's hard to see what's important. But it's a cool angle, and it's a cool feeling of depth
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Thank you! Yeah I think your right about defining a focal point, I tend to get a bit carried away and go off on a tangent when I start colouring!
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Great work! Plenty of depth and it has a lot of dramatic movement. The colors are great and of course fits wonderfully with the falling leaves. It does absolutely work as a whole, but I would perhaps have liked to see the two people a little stronger. Right now they are a little too hidden to clearly appear as the main motive. But that's just my personal opinion, and I'm not even sure if it would look better or not. Great work anyway!
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Thanks for the comment! 
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that's beautiful
i liked the flying, floating effect, and leaves,texture of the hairs ...
bluring background creates depth.
lovely piece of work
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Opps! I tried bluring the foreground instead, Ill give it ago the other way round next time!
Thank you very much!
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you're very welcome
by the way bluring the foreground also is a good idea in order to create depth, because the elements which are to close to eye, are not catched corretly, and so appears blured
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Lol, I think a bit of practice is in order for me! Thanks!
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Yeah I like it!
What bothers me a tiny little bit is the overall fuzziness, and that the ground doesn't look far away at all (they're flying, right?)
Other than that, I really love it!
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Thank you! Yes, they are in the air but I imagined they were just floating above the ground, Lol I wasn't sure how to show that so I tried blurring the foreground!! Maybe a bit too much
Thanks for the comment!
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Tu sais je viens de réaliser que c'est rijio, pas riijo... o.O
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mdr! tout le monde pense que c'est rijo d'habitude XD
en fait Rijio c'est tu prends mon prénom tu remplace le L par un R et le V par un J XD
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Ton prénom c'est Livio? Je croyais que c'était Guillaume?
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mdr oui bcp de personnes le pensent ^^ pourtant je place toujours mon prénom avant mon nom de famille ou bien j'écris mon nom de famille en capitales mais rien y fait lol
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xD L'habitude de voir Guillaume en prénom sans doute!
C'est italien, Livio?
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vouiii *3*
mon 2e prénom c'est d'ailleurs MArio XD
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Livio Mario, enchantée xD
Mais pourquoi 2 prénoms?
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Le nom de mon gd-pere XD
Enfin dans ma famille tout le monde a un 2e prénom...
Mais j'en connais qui ont 2 voire 4 prénoms XD (en plus de celui qu'ils utilisent XD
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Les portugais sont très forts dans ce domaine aussi
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