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Cookieteller — What time is it? ADVENTURE TIME!!!!!!
Published: 2012-09-09 11:47:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 1305; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 60
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Whew! That was radical!Welp..... I just hope you like it adventurers.....
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I love Adventure Time but this is why I might be a bit harsh, sorry if I do seem mean or cold about this picture it's just straight out bad. The vision is not so easy since I couldn't after a few moments figured out that well those were the princesses in the background.((I found out when I saw Lsp you did oki on her but wheres the star on her head?~?)) The originality was ehh... Ask me later on it. The technique REALLY
could use some work on it. Impact would be zero since well I didn't really like the picture at all since well, it wasn't really made that well. Try to work on making lines more even with each other to each other so it looks better and maybe look at a few art books too so you get the idea and the feel of the way how to draw better. I would really love to see this picture maybe in the future with the re-do loved art meme where you can make it better and compare how it looks to show your progress. We all get better at everything if we put out minds to it. Hope you were oki with this!
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Okay .. so this is my 4th critique .. and since you asked for one ... I'll give you .
Okay , the way you draw is okay , and the coloring also . But some of it is poor since you messed the lights and shadows up . The way you drew the princess doesn't look good either , you should try drawing with anatomy or sketch and finalize it . And the way you draw Jake is also okay , but some of it are not really good , especially the arms . The way you draw the background is poorly drawn , since you doesn't give any details on it , you should fix some of it .
And this art doesn't give me a good impact , and you should still try your best . You should also make a good jam with it.
Remember , I'm just trying to make you improve and you also asked for critiques , so I gave you .
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Hi This is Really My Very First Critique,So,Lol.
All I can say Is That The Shape Needs a Little
Fixed details,you know what i mean.And the elbows
needs to be fixed,the eyes too,the girls need to be
fixed,Marcy's Hair,PB's Crown,FP looks Alright
LSP too.But the ice kingdom is Nice though.
And Jake's Arms are a bit Fail,but your coloring
is nice but you missed some things.And Shadows
Need to Be Practiced.Ice King Needs to be fixed Too,The Shoes And the sies of the Girls Need to be fixed too.
I'm Just helping u imporve.Bye.Thats All I can Say For now.
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It is an awesome picture but the background girls could be better,like adding more colour and makeing then a bit thinier thats all but i have toi have a hundred words so
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