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Description Costume TF continued..

Xenomorph

Days past, days turned to weeks and I hadn't moved from that spot since I was changed, I don't know why but I was starting to be at ease with being a Xenomorph, I didn't know if it was the costumes comforts or if it was just messing with my head, I couldn't sit here any longer though....getting hungry....after I raid the fridge.....I'll try to figure this shit out.

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The house was a complete mess, it could've reminded you of 'No man's land' from world war one. A large pile of post was gathering at the door, tables and chairs were slung to the floor, a huge packing box was on its side, packing peanuts all over the floor, paper and other household nick nacks were littered everywhere, lamps were on their sides and the TV on top of a wooden case in the corner was smashed in….even the wall mirror was broken, a deep splintered crack in the middle of it as if someone had punched it out of hatred…and in the corner was a curled black mass, silently breathing, lying still…motionless, wet pitter patter of saliva dripping onto the floor from a forever snarling maw……

So...here I was, days later and now a Xenomorph from those Alien films, y'know the ones, black bodies, dome heads, wicked claws and tails, considered to be the deadliest creature known to man and space? Well...in the films they are, as they're supposed to be fictional and not real at all. But quite recently I'm a very living, breathing and drooling proof that they are real, I was just a great big example of it. I'm huddled in my little corner, curled up, still confused and frightened at what's just happened to me. My alien stomach growls, reaching my clawed hands down slowly and rubbing my chest with a hiss. That's all I could think about, you would be this hungry to if you hadn't eaten in weeks, god knows how I could last that long, it must have something to do with this costume, but I'm to hungry to care. Slowly I uncurl from my corner, blinking mentally…placing my clawed hands onto the cold vinyl floor boards, looking down at them in my hunched position, still unused to seeing such a thing that was now me, then my legs…carefully bringing them forward to sit on my haunches, my muscles ached greatly as I hadn't moved much at all these past few weeks. My tail slowly to, unfurled behind me, scratching the wall and tearing off a shred of wallpaper which clung to the scythe like blade on the end of the bony, spine tail. I look behind myself and spot it, bringing around my tail and picking off the paper with a deep sigh that came out as a low hiss. Ive gotten up fully now and stretch all my limbs, making an odd grunting noise as I leant back down and walked towards the kitchen…leaving a puddle where I had been curled from the drool.

Walking into the kitchen, you could still see nothing had moved since I first got the costume, dishes from my breakfast that morning and the empty mug I had from my coffee days earlier….I start to sob silently…wiping over my dome head to try and wipe tears even though there were no eyes to make them…my sobs came out as soft screeches, still sobbing as I opened the fridge only to be greeted by a empty one. It struck me I was supposed to go food shopping that day…but obviously…I was delayed in doing so……..I snarl and punch the wall next to it, hissing deeply and slamming the fridge door! Making it shudder in place till all went silent once more I wailed, moving back into the living room, clawed feet clacking on the hard floor….just then, the doorbell rang and I froze! I stopped and listened….nothing for a few seconds till it dinged again, my stomach lurching a promising thought flooded my mind. There was prey on the other side of that door….I could open that door up quick, pull the human inside and feed…slamming it shut before anyone could see or hear him cry for help. I find myself inching towards the door, I could hear the person on the other side, shuffling their feet, what was I doing?! I couldn't do this! I am human I cant kill another because I'm hungry…but this desire to feed was overwhelming, this costume was pressing into my thoughts, demanding I feed but my other half fighting back against it…my claw reached out for the handle…I was yelling at myself not to do it, My body trembled just as I heard the human give up and walk away….

With a great sigh I stand there, I'm shaking…claw still poised to open the door,   I slumped to the floor, broken and mentally exhausted. A strange feeling washed over me then, I couldn't place my finger on it, its like someone's behind you but cant see them, just you know somehow
I whirl around, expecting to see someone but not a soul was there…

I felt like I was playing that board game 'Guess who' with myself.



I couldn't except this, this was to sudden to just let sink in, a living costume was talking to me, its transformed me into a movie monster and to really take the piss its been roaming around inside my mind, I felt anger boiling up inside me, screeching I pound the floor and hiss greatly.

There was a brief pause, somehow I could feel the costume thinking over what I just said…
I scoff at him
I could almost feel this costumes emotions as well as my own, all tangled up in the mass of thoughts.
This thing was just not getting it, and…I could swear it seemed hurt in a way that I was very much the opposite of happy.


I couldn't believe my sudden outburst of anger, my chest was rising and falling rapidly and my tail was swaying due to the tension and emotional explosion, grazing the floor.
There was no reply from the costume and I felt it mentally wince when I told it I hated it, it just hissed softly to me…which was soothing a little but it didn't rid the fact I was still angry

I wasn't sure what to do now, it seemed so very sad, it just wanted to be alive, but I still had no idea why it is alive in the first place, but…nonetheless…hearing its story. It even spoke saddened, its voice a lower hissed tone than it was before, I feel him mentally weep, if he could he'd have his tail between his legs like a dog just been shouted at by its owner….strangely I found myself doing that, lowering my head, tail between my legs I leant down, looking at my eyeless face in a piece of broken mirror on the floor…I just told it I hate it… I chuckle a little, coming out as a low series of growls




He said
I smiled a toothy grin
Tar'chiss sighed

Tar'chiss thinks hard, till finally he shook his head mentally, giving up

Again, I sense Tar'chiss thinking hard
I roll my imaginary eyes I say with a little laugh. So, I was getting somewhere, It had a name but still this was all just to weird, but my growling stomach brings me right back to the fact I'm still starving here, I look around, Tar'chiss just remains silent for a moment till he butted in



He said with an unhappy sigh
I look around my house, up the stairs, in drawers, cupboards, under the bed and closets till finally back in the kitchen, I open the storage cupboard and find about three tins of tinned fruit, I hold them up to my maw and gnaw on the edge of the tin, piercing the rim and using my claws to rip the rest of the tin open. Looking at the fruit inside in a syrup like thing. I open my mouth and second one, pouring in some and chewing…
I spit out the mangled fruit onto the floor, coughing and spluttering, my second jaw jutting out and hacking out bits of chew fruit.
Spits I say, turning the tin upside down to check before Tar'chiss once again steps in
My mouth began to water as Tar'chiss kept on, the sound of hot flesh and all juices sounded very appealing, yet my mind said otherwise.

He chuckled. I find myself smiling a little to, but a fluttering of outside caught both our attentions, a fat city pigeon had flown down to peck around on my back patio
Almost unbelieving I'm actually suggestion eating a live pigeon. I could tell he was thinking for a bit as he stared at it with me.

Before I knew it, Tar'chiss seized my body from me and sprinted through the kitchen, through the outside area and onto the patio! Seizing the poor bird before it could even coo, Tar'chiss snapped its neck and brought it inside, dumping the fat bird on the table then releasing my body back to me.



I look down at our so called 'meal' dead, limp, wings spread out, lifeless…


I lean down and smell at the bird, it smelled rather good actually, like a roast dinner on Sunday, that type of smell and the eagerness to stuck in that came with it. I pick it up it both my claws, wincing a little and taking a great chomp out of the top, ripping away the top half of the bird so only entrails and its legs were left.

I find myself nodding and slowly chew, crunching bones and marrow, blood oozing out of my fangs a little, I chew a little faster and swallowed…GULP!!
Said Tar'chiss

I took another bite, chewing and swallowing happily, eating everything, the bones, eyes, feathers and even the beak, till there was no more pigeon left! I wipe my mouth of blood and feathers and grin.




I ask


I felt Tar'chiss move in and take control, he walked us back into my destroyed living room and approached a wall, he put my claws onto the wall and grabbed hold, well at least I thought that's what he did, he reached up with my other claw and placed it just in front of that one and climbed! He was climbing the wall!

Tar'chiss laughed as he continued to climb the wall, reaching the ceiling and even crawling along that till we were upside down! I was dumbstruck, I didn't think I could do this! I didn't feel the blood rush to my head or anything and he just sat us there, letting me have control of my limbs back, I wobbled a little but I was still staying on my ceiling, prodding my hanging light.



I hung there, my tail dangling down loosely like a swaying pendulum, my drool dripping down onto the broke table below me. Then a sort of happiness for the first time yet, actually enjoying myself

I could almost sense his heart jump with glee, he washed a soothing, warm sensation over my entire body, obviously loving my acceptance.

With a hiss like chuckle I nod
Tar'chiss ceased the warm feelings   He whimpered as I dropped down to the floor.
I hissed to him gently, sitting down on my sofa, careful with my tail and stroked my dome head.

He listened but he wasn't sure if he was going to like what was coming.

There was a pause…




I felt a warmth within me, settling, cosy…the feeling you get when your inside your home, next to a fire and outside its cold and stormy, that feeling of secure.


I could feel something happening to me, Tar'chiss had become silent as I heard bones pop and crack, painlessly this time, odd I thought, but still it was creepy having my bones rearrange like this I nod as my body continued to change back to my old self, I went blind suddenly and felt something cramped around my head, it was hot and stuff, I reach up my claws and slowly remove the head of the Xenomorphs, it felt odd, like taking off a second head if I ever had one! I guess technically I had two if Id be coming to the Xeno's. I got the head off as my nose and face crunched back into place as it came, then, finally getting it fully off and holding the head in my claws, the head back to its rubber self, its teeth back to latex to.

"Wow, that was really freaky, If you can still hear me Tar'chiss, the rest of me now please" Almost on demand, I reached around my back and found that zipper, fumbling with it I unzip the material and pull the flaps back, my legs began to crunch reform, bringing them out of the suits….it felt really strange as I did this, it was like pulling off a layer of my own skin in big chunks. Finally got my legs free and my middle, still wearing the shorts I started with , stepping out fully from the latex suit with just my arms left inside the sleeves. I chuckled as the rest of me was human and just my arms and hands were still and Xenomorphs. Those to I felt began to give a little, slipping them free with that odd peeling feeling like you would an orange! I got my arms free and my hands from the gloves of the costume, or should I say Tar'chiss.

"There we go, I hope that pigeon I ate wont back up on me now I'm human again" Laughing I sit back down on my sofa and put the table back up onto its legs, I set the latex suit beside me on the arm of the chair and the head I prop in front of me on the top, wiping off dust from the table top, I look at the head, or Tar'chiss rather, I felt sorry for him…I take all these feelings and this life for granted while he has just a shell to live…well, with me around he wont have to worry about that again.

I look around my destroyed living room, getting up and picking the first letter off the pile of mail, opening "Well, I've been fired now, Mr Wong gave me the sack! Well, if I go back and make something up, he may give me another chance…now, I better get everything fixed, clean and my stories straight, people are going to want to know where I've been, but first…> I walk over back to table, picking up the suit and laying it over my arm, then picking up the Xenomorph head, holding it in front of me with a chuckle "I best get this place tidy, my bills to pay and a certain shop owner to call to get my job back, get that done and I've a feeling you may live again tonight Tar'chiss"

As I held the head under my arm, I could've said Tar'chiss was smiling….
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Comments: 69

ZillaFan89 [2016-06-05 08:52:55 +0000 UTC]

Many guys mentioned it already but please vontinue writing. Maybe you could start a thread where users can tell them ideas.

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ZillaFan89 [2016-06-05 00:42:26 +0000 UTC]

Nice story!
Bit Xenomorphs are omnivore, he could have eaten the fruits...

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Lucasfan375 [2015-11-20 02:48:44 +0000 UTC]

So, what happened to the guy and the costume after that?

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TandoujiVit [2015-03-25 01:46:22 +0000 UTC]

Man you can write a book with this history, 'cause it's so PERFECT! <3 I really love this. You're great!

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TangledMangle [2014-10-19 21:17:58 +0000 UTC]

That was an incredibly entertaining story! I've read through a few Xenomorph transformations on DA but most were ridiculous. This however was the most enjoyable one I've ever read (being the third time I've read through it).
My deepest apologies if this annoys you (hearing it so often) but I cannot help but feel saddened that this is the last part. I could already imagine more. A continuation. After all...Tar'chiss being a Xenomorph could easily betray Ben in some way. Gaining his trust and taking the body to his own advantage. I'm assuming he didn't have to be kind enough to let him have his human form back. But how knows? Perhaps he could just be an innocent Xenomorph sharing the mind with a simple human being. Learning and understanding a whole different species enough to become the first good and most human (on the inside) Xenomorph. I'm sure there could be many things you could do and create (if you was to ever consider doing more)...Hunger could get the better of them. What if someone found out about Ben's secret? Sorry to go on...I've become quite a fan of Aliens recently after playing Alien Isolation. It's high time I started getting back to drawing again (particularly Xenomorphs)! Thank you for sharing such a fun story!

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saturnDean [2014-09-28 01:02:54 +0000 UTC]

Now that is what I call a happy ending!

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Rethar-Stonehammer [2013-11-05 07:10:15 +0000 UTC]

So awesome! The Xenomorph ROCKS!! 5 stars!

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Artwatcher0706 [2013-08-07 09:53:19 +0000 UTC]

the best story I have ever read can I get some questions are you going to do more and i want also to make story's would you like to give me some tips 

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breecer1 [2012-11-28 20:13:10 +0000 UTC]

You know what would be funny, at least to me? Was that Ben agreed to put on the costume every night right? So then he calls a friend up to his house and puts the box where Tar'chiss is in, outside, and pours gasoline on the box, and then lights it on fire. Man that would be funny it's like "Well I could put the costume on every night, but I'm just gonna burn you up."

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EskeWolf406 [2012-10-18 02:42:03 +0000 UTC]

I love this SO Really Ben change into a xenomorph every night? Now I want that costume :3 This is great story!

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wolfsjourney [2012-09-23 07:51:54 +0000 UTC]

This is brilliant. For a particular topic like this, there are so many other ways that people would write it. But your approach makes it interesting because it is so different and easy for people to relate to.

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Bardmine4 [2012-06-03 07:29:29 +0000 UTC]

Please continue it is too good to stop now

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GTAtomten [2011-08-10 09:00:23 +0000 UTC]

Very nice story! I really enjoyed reading it

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EldLynch-Tristan [2011-05-31 02:46:08 +0000 UTC]

I hope they invent costumes like this so I can go to school as a xenomorph

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ziuziu12 In reply to EldLynch-Tristan [2013-01-19 01:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Must..Resist urge...To go on ebay.... xD

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theyaoione [2011-04-03 01:14:06 +0000 UTC]

give me a queen costume i need one NOW!!!!!

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Coredeath In reply to theyaoione [2011-04-03 12:05:54 +0000 UTC]

Like, right this very second? ^_^

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theyaoione In reply to Coredeath [2011-04-03 16:10:27 +0000 UTC]

well i'll wait a bit but i must have one and screw taking it off! ill chose to be awsome than human wouldn't you? (spaz)

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Coredeath In reply to theyaoione [2011-04-03 16:28:46 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, yeah, Id agree with you 100%, heck if your roleplayed Id even do something like that with you XD You seem epicly insane and fun ^_^

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theyaoione In reply to Coredeath [2011-04-03 16:43:47 +0000 UTC]

lets do that could you help with a cool name im thinken something allong the lines of Ze'thsss for the suits name if it is self awere wat you think? and im kayla btw. and do you think you could draw "ME" im thinken a smallish queen (cause im pretty short)and if by insane id be willing to be facehugged if my self awereness was transfured to the xeno then you have met one insane gal

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Coredeath In reply to theyaoione [2011-04-03 17:04:32 +0000 UTC]

Haha, you bring a smile to my face Kayla, an honour to meet you ^_^ I'm afraid I do not draw, but its bit first on to ask a favour right away hmm? hehe, I only kid, I'll ask around, some guys owe me some freebies heh. But anyway, how long you been around DA? And do you have MSN or AIM? And noooo Im not a creepy guy! I'm into the whole Aliens thing and such and theres me in my gallery under 'UKCM' take a look! I just like meeting new Deviants is all ^_^

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theyaoione In reply to Coredeath [2011-04-03 17:29:23 +0000 UTC]

not long im a kid 2 only 17 (mentaly yunger)and its not like ill invite you yo my house even though you arnt a creepy guy my pics are mearly collor overs witch i say as not to get in truble. sooo what do you think of the name and maby i should give you a discription so your friends can maby draw a minne comic 5ft something LOL dirty blond green glasses(witch i like to imagen ill still were as an xeno cause i like them and it would really freak out hosts and food-things LOL)blue eyes hate shoes and a spaz as a queen every creature is a good hoste diverisity is what i want for stronger hive mates. im pretty much a human elf (wish i could be a xeno im actuly jeullis((god my spelling sux)) of them pretoriens/queens partictuly.) what do i call you by the way coredeath?

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Coredeath In reply to theyaoione [2011-04-03 17:43:21 +0000 UTC]

Call me? And wow that's alot of text, and to repeat my question if it got lost in my own wall of text, 'Does you have an instant messaging program like MSN or AIM, this DA messaging system is a bit slooooow, lol, I'll tell you my name when we instant message, this is to slow for me ^_^. Besides its alot easier to chat then.

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theyaoione In reply to Coredeath [2011-04-03 17:49:39 +0000 UTC]

no sorry. are you gona make more story to fule my crazyness? lol. and what are your vews on twin chestbusters

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Coredeath In reply to theyaoione [2011-04-03 18:28:06 +0000 UTC]

Wellll if you fancy a chat try going onto any chat room and in the chat box type:

/join thatrpplace

I'll hanging around for the next few hours and Im interested in what else is knocking around your mind Aliens thingies or whatever XDD

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theyaoione In reply to Coredeath [2011-04-03 18:55:29 +0000 UTC]

dont know how to set up a chat but this works but im a little worried about Ze'thsss name is it alien enough is it to short should i come up with another?
idea!
Ze'thsss heard the humans talking.female"we have a buyer." male"wich skin did they buy?" female"the pretorien." male"i rember her we lost good men tring to skin her alive but its the only way to keep them alive afterwords." female"lets box her up theyaoione is impatient she nearly crashed the computer with her shril voice we lost 3 speakers." male"thats what we need people who want these things that much." Ze'thsss was moved to a box with white fluff things she did not know the name for. she waited patently as she was mailed wondering what kind of person bought her.
i cant come up with it all its soppost to be role play. *chiledish pout*LOL what do you think?

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Coredeath In reply to theyaoione [2011-04-03 18:57:09 +0000 UTC]

O_o Just join any old DA chatroom to start with, and just go to the chat box bit and type

/join thatrpplace

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theyaoione In reply to Coredeath [2011-04-03 18:58:15 +0000 UTC]

how im a noob but ill try first

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Coredeath In reply to theyaoione [2011-04-03 18:59:17 +0000 UTC]

lol its easy, Id kjust rather talk to you in real time and not via these, its rather odd to see HUGE comments on devaint art pages

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theyaoione In reply to Coredeath [2011-04-03 19:01:51 +0000 UTC]

ok but i cant really find where to go to get there

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Coredeath In reply to theyaoione [2011-04-03 19:03:13 +0000 UTC]

[link]

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Coredeath In reply to theyaoione [2011-04-03 18:03:06 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I might do, hey, what about a chat room? A DA chat room you know? Heck it'll be easy enough to make one XD If you don't have one make one

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theyaoione In reply to Coredeath [2011-04-03 18:38:19 +0000 UTC]

this works hey why not bring in others we need more people in this story/role play. care to start? i order a pretorien costume that caost a shit load of money because it suposidly was used in the movie. kayla"only 2 more days until it comes i can't wait!" as i bobed up and down in my computer chair unable to stay still.kayla"i spent my whole summer working odd jobs and it paied off! i hope it will be confterable im gonna wear that thing at every opperitunity! im such a spaz but who gives a shit its fun!" i hardy ate or slept that night far to excited,little did i know i wasnt the only one excited by my purchis...

good start? you can start on Ze'thsss's pov you can give her any personality you want (but my will is near unbreackible when it comes to i really want something and i can get it)
so death if that is your real name LOL what do you think?

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Coredeath In reply to theyaoione [2011-04-03 18:43:16 +0000 UTC]

Woah woah woah! To much text! XD Tell me all this AFTER you get in this chatroom haha

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theyaoione In reply to Coredeath [2011-04-03 18:58:49 +0000 UTC]

is it good so far though?

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Coredeath In reply to theyaoione [2011-04-03 19:04:43 +0000 UTC]

Yep, then when you get in there, just write what I said in the chat box

/join thatrpplace

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theyaoione In reply to Coredeath [2011-04-03 19:07:51 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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XanderDragon [2011-04-01 14:30:20 +0000 UTC]

Very nice, I love both parts to it, it would be great if you coninued it, but, I can understand that you wouldn't know where to start...This part didn't end with a part you could really start with

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Coredeath In reply to XanderDragon [2011-04-03 12:01:30 +0000 UTC]

I'm terrible at endings D:

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XanderDragon In reply to Coredeath [2011-04-03 12:49:27 +0000 UTC]

naww, thats not good, but its understandable, Still, you did a great job with it!

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Coredeath In reply to XanderDragon [2011-04-03 16:29:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, I appreciate it, you have any pointers at all?

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XanderDragon In reply to Coredeath [2011-04-04 05:44:19 +0000 UTC]

improvements and stuff? Sorry, I don't, but I do know a good way to improve, is to look at other people's writing, have a look at my tf story called Fighting Instinct if you'd like

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Coredeath In reply to XanderDragon [2011-04-04 09:10:15 +0000 UTC]

Will do!

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DrSomepony [2011-02-20 20:49:36 +0000 UTC]

It must be Cotinued ! pleas , its so awesome !

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Coredeath In reply to DrSomepony [2011-03-20 19:22:23 +0000 UTC]

I wouldn't know where to begin.

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evfan13 In reply to Coredeath [2011-05-27 19:11:08 +0000 UTC]

maybe start with Tar'chisss/Ben stalking through the night to scare the crap outta someone for laughs, and then eventually Ben gets a plan to somehow make it so Tar'chisss doesn't need a host. you could improvise the stuff in between those tow points.

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DrSomepony In reply to Coredeath [2011-03-21 18:12:58 +0000 UTC]

:/ hmmmm

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kyuubifreak234 [2010-12-23 02:37:01 +0000 UTC]

that was really good, i liked tar'chiss, in a way you made him feel alive. you should definitely continue with this.

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TimtheBigDaddy [2010-10-14 11:41:55 +0000 UTC]

make another one! this was awesome! i wish i could be a dragon or a xenomorph!

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Coredeath In reply to TimtheBigDaddy [2010-10-15 09:17:11 +0000 UTC]

Ah but given the choice, which of the two?

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