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Published: 2012-04-04 08:29:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 740; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 19
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Kiriban Prize for ~Crispritz Download for full size!First of all... HOLY CRAP. xD My hand hurts SO bad. :'D I am proud of this, for the most part. This is my first FULL-EFFORT DRAWING I've EVER done... and I love the results! ;u; *sniffsniff* Mainly because I used all the techniques I've learned into this, the burning and dodge tools helped me a LOT with the shading and lighting effects. The smudge tool played a big part in smudging the shading and lighting, plus the trees and snow. Gah... <3 Very proud.
Second.. there are things I just realized that I missed or messed-up on. And I'll name some of them so I can remember what to add on. x3
- Fix the shadows
- Paw prints in snow
- Snow on trees
- Less opacity on character lines
- Snow on the character fur.
XD I have several.. I'll get to that sometime!
Alrighty, so this is what I'll be drawing in commissions from now on. YOU tell me how much you think this is worth in points/money value. So far, I'mma just place a price 400-800 points [$5-$10] considering what you want and how much it's worth... after all this IS full-effort so..
Am I charging too high? Too low? ...Meh. ono
My commissions for now are here --> [link]
These are my current prices.. they may change eventually, so some won't be too cheap, and others won't be too high.
I hope you like this, Ritz! You're my best friend and I REALLY enjoyed this... my most prized drawing now.~
Ritz (c) ~Crispritz
Oreo (c) =Oreosauce
Art (c) =Oreosauce
YOU ARE NOT ALLOWED TO USE THIS! ONLY RITZ AND I ARE ALLOWED TO USE THIS.
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Comments: 38
First off if I must say you did a very wonderful job on this. c:
Downs,
But, if I had to say things you should work on are the shadows they are not all going in the same direction which is confusing where some of them are placed is confusing too.
Your anatomy is improving but still needs some work for example the tongue and the paws.
Ups,
I love how the characters are feeling, having a fun time out there. The scarf patterns are very cute and so. The theme is cute and interesting. Much fun looks like it has been put in this.
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First off, the style of the drawing is pretty cool! It looks like a getting card! >W< Oreo and Ritz are drawn neatly with excellent shading, perfect shadows, and adorable facial expressions! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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i remember wen u were covering it uyp qwith lines <3
typos omg <3
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OH MY STARCLAN THAT LOOKS SO AMAZING AND STUNNING AND AFDAGSDEGAGsgfeaferagafer <3<3<3
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REALLY MAKOMDLSF <333
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It looks awesome! What did you draw it in? Smudge, dodge, and burn are my fav tools besides the paintbrush. Really nice job!
I think your commission prices are about right. A lot of people set them too low, I think.
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Really? :"D Gah thank you! I used Photoshop CS3, actually. What do you use, outta curiosity? Yeees, they are definitely my three favorite tools! Without them, drawings wouldn't come to life as they do!
Alright, that's good. x3 You are indeed right; a lot of people set them waaay too low and they could be making more than what they are charging for.
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I use GIMP, pretty similar from what I've heard. I have Photoshop Elements 8 but I never use it 
But yea, really nice work
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Awesome ^u^ I think Photoshop has more professional tools but I really don't use many tools on it anyway.. xDD Gimp is pretty much the same, just limited on some things.
Thank you very much :"D
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USDIGYDUSIOGYFUIGLDF YOU'RE SO WELCOME. <3
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Awww of course, my dear friend!
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Amg! I luv it 
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Do not print... e3e just yet... I'mma do some changes U:<
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Oh fine then :U But it does look awesome ;3
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But this sucks! April foo-- What? I MISSED APRIL FOOLS DAY?? *sigh* That would've been perfect.
THIS IS THE MOSTEST AMAZING THING I HASH EVER SEEN! I wish I could buy the commissions, but I am low on Points and I can't buy them. ;^;
I honestly don't like how you and Socks raised your prices... I mean, I know it was because of that Point Value thing, but it kinda ensures that only people with parents who will pay for the Points or people who can buy them themselves can get the commissions. =^= Just my opinion, though.
BACK TO THE DRAWING.
This is amazing. I really like how the setting is lineless, yet the characters have lines, and the blurred trees in the way back are a nice touch. It has great luminocity and shading, but it would have more of a winter feeling if there was snow on other things, say in the fur or on the trees.
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Meh I know. D: I'm sorry I raised them. I just honestly felt ripped off for not charging only a couple cents. ^3^" But yeah..
Thank you so much! :"D FFF I'm glad you mentioned that. .n. I was gonna add some snow onto the trees and stuff! xD I totally forgot all about that... thank you thank you. .u. I have several things that should be added so I WILL edit this for sure. Thank you very much ^u^
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How. HOW. this is amazing, that shadow, everything, wowowowowowowowowwow
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I DON'T KNOW THANK YOU SO MUCH Omfsnkfsf
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