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Published: 2004-09-04 19:00:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 229; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 15
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The leaves have fallenThey lie still upon the ground
Will she keep me warm?
A photo and a haiku (I need to improve my poetry).
A photograph as a study of texture and shadow.
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I love this one..... so many memories come to thought...... tis quite a lovely piece.
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Thank you for that compliment
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You're welcome.
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yeah...you do need to work on your haikus...but yours is still a decent haiku.
how about this?
something about them
the structure?the style? puzzled...
i don't like haikus
nice work by the way...i like how you deleted the color from the leaves when its the trees that shed their clothes of blazing color that attract people to autumn.
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I like doing Haiku's (haiki?) but reading them not as much.
Anyway, yeah, I guess people see autumn as golds, browns and many shades, but I just wanted the texture and shadows. For me Autumn sometimes has the feel of a season when all the colours: blue sky and flowers, start to give in to the wintery black and white. In reality no season has more or less colour, just night has less...
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the color is still there at night, so its not necessarily less, its just shadowed and dilluted by dusk's touch.
to be techincal about it...i knew what you were saying..i guess im still in critical thinking mode from class.
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uhm. I'm going for colour being light that is reflected and not emitted, and therefore as light lessens the light reflected does also. Now if that means less colours (or colors), or not I don't know, but that's my excuse.
'8)
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