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Cornelious-Raidon — EC pg. 9 - Goal Within Reach
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Drawn in manga format, read right to left.
And here's the next page guys, hope you enjoy it.
We have the duo finally reaching the top of Mt. Colossus and seeing the Master Elemental Emerald in reach, though the Guardian clearly has a bone to pick with them.
This page was one of the first ones done actually, it came out decently well so I like it. There's a lot of text btw, so sorry for that. The page wasn't drawn real well for accommodating it all.
Also decided to title each page, so the names wouldn't be so generic.
As always tell us what you think! ^^
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no not the light people fighting
beth:*faints then gets up* why are people ...... *sob*
(i'm bethxsunmoon beths owner)
p.s: luv the comic XD
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The guardian is about to kick some butts
Again, Jay did an awesome job on expressions and poses, and you did great on dialogue and lettering ^^ Is the speech bubble's tail on panel 6 goes right across Umbra on purpose? Because I was confused at first, since I usually avoid tails to go like this, but again, it might just symbolise that Flare doesn't care about what Umbra thinks at all
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It could be taken that way, yes, very much so. XD But in a comic, the character is the most important thing, and if I had it the other way, the character would be obscured, you want them to have the center of attention and be fully visible. Having a speech balloon in the way just causes some problems lol. The bottom panel with Flare couldn't be helped like this though, he had a long thought to say, so I had to block view of his hand to do so. The tail in that panel is used so you can see the background with Umbra in it too, I didn't want all that to be unseen either. XD But thanks for the comment! ^^ I'm glad you liked it.
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Oh not very well done my left shoe
I think it looks really good, as usual
I guess I'm a little confused though, does it read right to left like the others? Or is it in american format now? /confused/
That's the only thing.
I think it looks just as cool as usual
fave'd, as usual XD
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It's still right to left lol I didn't change these pages' format. All of the prologue is in Manga format.
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I guess it was just me with my dyslexia kicking in there lol (ok, I don't really have dyslexia, but sometimes I'm so blonde it seems like it XD)
It was still great though! :3
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where hv u been for sooo long
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I don't talk to anyone much anymore. I don't feel like pouring my problems on everyone.
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ohh 
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I've been busy though, plus it's just a lot to handle, and I don't want anyone else to be weighed down by my problems.
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