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Published: 2006-10-06 05:16:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 154; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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darkness sourrounds mecuts me like raz0rs
a form of lifes depression
surround me
find comfort
in darkness
my insides fall apart
slashed and left to bleed
i tear myself apart
my weakness
the darkness
surrounds me
nothing to hold me
i lie back and scream
forced life, dead inside
slashing and tearing my flesh
in a metaphorical sense
that i am now bleeding in hatred
the darkness
my eyes
infiltrated
blinded by rage and a distrought sense of comfort
something ill never find again
while your razors skin me alive
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Comments: 6
corpseface In reply to Darkmerchant [2006-10-07 10:22:43 +0000 UTC]
sttttaaaabbbbbb youuuuu khheennnttt
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Zorya [2006-10-06 22:13:20 +0000 UTC]
Reminds me on some of a few poems of mine... before the block.
Well done!
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corpseface In reply to Zorya [2006-10-07 05:01:10 +0000 UTC]
thanx, i need to shange it a bit, but thanx for the fave
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Dragoneye88 [2006-10-06 09:16:46 +0000 UTC]
ummm..ok..its a bit...dark...well written though..
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corpseface In reply to Dragoneye88 [2006-10-06 10:45:22 +0000 UTC]
meh... ive written darker
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