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Published: 2017-08-22 22:08:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 1637; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 0
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I promissied long time ago that i'm gonna post more wip's of my models... so finally here it is! xDI made it pretty much in less than 20 minutes, so it's really late wip xD
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(First critique ever, so I don't have too good of an idea of what I'm doing).
Another Funtime Bonnie model because Scott didn't make a real Funtime Bonnie, the closest we ever got to that was Bon-Bon. Let's see what this one has to offer so far...
1. The Ears
The ears look pretty good all together but they're a bit tall. And this is a bit different from the official Bonnie models such as the FNaF 1 Bonnie, Withered Bonnie, Nightmare Bonnie, even Bon-Bon, because the official models of Bonnie only have two segments, not three. And you made the tops of the ears pointed, when they should be rounded.
2. The Head
I give the head an 8/10. There's a few flaws, though. The eye holes should be a bit more rounded and I'm not sure what's with the black dots on the eyebrows. Unless this is supposed to be more like Toy Bonnie, this shouldn't have eyebrows, the cheecks should be purple, and the head materials should be white and pink like Funtime Freddy and Funtime Foxy, not white and blue, (then again, there's nothing wrong with a little originality here and there). The eyes should be more purple, rather than a shade of blue. And maybe make the material of the head just a bit more reflective. I gave an 8/10 for the head because these are minor changes that I personally think should be made.
Then again, this is a Work-In-Progress, so I can let all these slide until I see the finished product of this, (this looks rather promising to me e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Oh, and one last thing, there better not be a Freddy hand-puppet :v, it's unoriginal and the idea of it is overused. I've seen it on a few Funtime Bonnie's.
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Thx for Critique!
1. I already wanted to make ears taller, just in my opinion it looks better like this here
2. I want eye holes to be like that, already mask looks better like that not like more rounded (yup i tried already to make it more rounded), TEXTURES FOR EYES ARE JUST FOR NO! ; - ; I had no really time to recolor the texture to pink/purple from blue
These "Black dots" on eyebrows are something like ballora have, it's kinda "Holder" for them.
3. I don't want to make it pink/purple, why? Because it will not look so good on the model imho. , i think that this light blue color looks pretty noice here.
4. Don't worry i'm not gonna make Freddy hand Puppet.
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I agree with the fact that blue looks nice, but I'd just expect that he would be pink and blue like the other two Funtime animal animatronics. These are only suggestions; if you feel like what you are doing is correct, I won't stop you. The final thing is probably still gonna look really cool anyway.
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Plushtrap and N Bonnie have 3 ear segments, ballora has blue so why not Bonnie? Also those dots on the brows are can be seen on ballora.
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Wew, a new spicy model.
Ok, I pulled up an image of all the funtimes to use them as comparison.
Ok, first things first, the ears. They do look pretty good. Something that bothers me though is how they seem "pinched" towards the bottom of each piece. It just seems a little out of place. Also, in the ears of the other two animal funtimes, freddy and foxy, the colored part of the ears is indented and not indented and then extruded like toy bonnie's and this model's ears. Small detail but it'll make the model feel more scott-like.
Next, the head. I really like the general shape of it overall. However, the face seems to be slightly "pushed in" where the eyes seem to be and between the face. Also, is it just me or is are the blue parts around the eyes protruding from his face? Last, I know that this is a wip, but the face should probably be split once horizontally.
Next, materials. I like the colors you chose. The white and blue seem sister-locationy and the the shade of blue is spiiiiiiiiiiiiicyyyyyyyyyy. They just need a little more reflection. The red cheeks seem out of place. 3/4 of the cheeks of the other funtimes are just darker shades of their main color. Freddy has dark purple. Baby has dark red. Etc. Ballora does have purple cheeks but they do fit in with her overall color scheme, being close to the main color and matching another part of her (tutu). P.S. i think purple eyes would work better because the current shade is a little close to the main color unlike the official funtimes.
Last, ik I'm supposed to be judging the model and not the lighting but the yellowy lighting doesn't really compliment the model and give that sister locationy feel. Just a small suggestion.
Sorry for the long critique, I have hope you take into account what I said here for the model and can't wait to see it finished! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/w/w… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Thx for critique!
1. Ah ik i noticed it already but idk if i'm gonna fix that, it looks pretty noice for me on this model ;'v but we will see
2. Head will be really changed don't worry lol
3. I'm not sure if "darker" color of blue would look good on cheeks, i'll see it later
4. AH lights are just only for now to see how the materials looks like, i'll change them when i'll do Poster with model
For for long critique
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Glad you like it!
And I agree dark blue checks probably wouldn't work, but idk if red works either. We'll see
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Wow I’ve used blender before but never to make something as amazing as that 0o0
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