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Published: 2005-11-07 00:32:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 758; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 34
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yay for fake japanese prints! a random idea that i thought someone would like.im pretty impressed by how some of this came out, but im still not sure about it so i saved a couple copies of it in various states. I'd Really love to hear criticisms/comments/suggestions for this one, it would really help me feel like ive either finished it or how i should finish it.
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Wow, I really like this, and it is very different than the rest of your gallery.
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Maybe you should put some japanese letters in one of the corners. Maybe one that stands for surprise or silent, something describing the fox. Those usually give the picture a good effect. ^_^ Glad I could help.
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heh heh the fox is gonna get him!!! poor unsuspecting crow. This is very nice!
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Nice. I really like the twig in the crow's beak. The crow looks like hes looking in the direction the fox jumped from thinking 'I heard a noise from over there...'. It looks finished, but to me the angle of the fox's paws make it look like he might miss the crow.
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maybe add a small line in the far background as a ground? Not under the fox, but on the horizon? like a plain maybe?? --so the fox doesn't look like he's jumping from the sky/looks like he's floating? this might also help the crow look smaller than the fox. other than that, it's really pretty!
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I love the movement of the fox. Crow is a bit big compared to him. They also don't usually use such vibrant colors in Japanese woodblocks. But I love it muchly.
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hmm.. you know i had played with the color of the fox a bit, and originaly it was toned down. then i made i ba whole lot brighter, then toned it down again... i did that for a bit. yeah, toning it down would definently make it more authenticish. hmm...
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very cool idea and very nice use of color. i think that what's needed is some eyes for the fox and the crow (that sounds like a parable or something). as cheesy as it sounds, eyes give something life.
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wow, this is awsome, 
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heh thanks! hmm, grass under the fox... well the thing is that the fox is actually in mid-jump, though i might want to suggest some kind of shadow undernieth it to clarify that
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adding the shadow would have taken away from the piece actually LOL
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no no,
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