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Sorry it’s been so long since the last part. Finals were a real pain.
Got sort of frustrated with this. The idea seemed nice in my head, but I don’t really like my execution… Had to cut some frames out, a long with a few scenes. Because I felt that I spent too much time with Speakeasy and Untoten interacting with extremely minor characters as opposed to each other. So It seemed more like filler than character development… It needs reworking, but I think I can make this work, despite the choppy pacing here. I apologize D: And the background dogs look so lame. Wow. Don’t worry, I’ve got most of the next page sketched and I think you all will like it
Also, feel free to critique me on things, or give advice.

Description
Sorry it’s been so long since the last part. Finals were a real pain.
Got sort of frustrated with this. The idea seemed nice in my head, but I don’t really like my execution… Had to cut some frames out, a long with a few scenes. Because I felt that I spent too much time with Speakeasy and Untoten interacting with extremely minor characters as opposed to each other. So It seemed more like filler than character development… It needs reworking, but I think I can make this work, despite the choppy pacing here. I apologize D: And the background dogs look so lame. Wow. Don’t worry, I’ve got most of the next page sketched and I think you all will like it
Also, feel free to critique me on things, or give advice.