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Name: Day Sue
Nickname: Untoten
(Meaning group of undead in german) The gangsters would call her that because her partial invisibility made her and her fetuses look like zombies. They use to use that when referring to her and her fetuses as a group, but now she is just stuck with the name.
Breed: Brussels Griffon
Gender: Female
Strengths: Partial invisibility, agile, gracefull.
Weakness: Small, sensitive to heat, Excessive blinking (the faster her heartrate, the more she blinks), mild Luxated Patella in her left hind leg(grade 2).
Personality: She is a very pack oriented, somewhat clingy dog. Kind, willing to help out, although she does feel suspicious and untrustworthy of others outside her gang. She has a good sense of morals, and wants to protect her 38 day old fetuses. She is pretty laid back and can deal with a lot of stuff. Being pregnant has caused her to have some slight mood swings due to hormonal changes. She tries her best to keep this under controll though. She has a fondness for puppys, and thinks its barbaric that Beyra is allowing them to enter.
Size: 10 pounds and 7 inches at the shoulder.
Age: 5 years
Appearance: Sort of like this [link] . Head is large in proportion to the body, undocked tail, cropped ears set low on head, large eyes, thick build.
History: A group of journalists doing a documentary on the Chernobyl explosion, went to visit Pripyat to do a bit of research. They stayed in a cabin on the outskirts of the city, and went to study the city in a few hour hour intervals. They brought along Day Sue at the time(She was 2 and a half years old), a dog that was owned by the boom operator. On the last visit, Day Sue ran off, attracted by a certain smell. When she was found, she was staring at the ground, it appeared that her face was half gone, parts of the skull and flesh visible. They freaked out, assuming it had something to do with the radiation. (It didn't) They couldn't bare to see her like that, but couldn't bring themselves to put her out of her misery. They left her there, trying to forget the grotesque sight, as tears welled in their eyes. Little did they know Day Sue was fine, she had just eaten a clump of a rare undiscovered, and unnamed element. It turned part of her face invisible, but after a few months, she learned how to move the particles throughout her body.
About two weeks later, she was discovered by this gang of dogs called the Protes, who gave her a place as a watchdog(aka alarm system). Her role has been to keep an eye out and bark at the sight or smell of a dog straying to close to their territory, and possible scare them away using her ability.

Invisibility: She uses the invisibility to play dead. There aren't enough particles to make her completely invisible, but enough for like, her head, midsection, or a few limbs. She can hustle(Is this the right word?) her opponents by making herself seem helpless, by making an eye, or leg or peaces of flesh invisible. Although her flesh can become invisible, its still tangible.
Likes: Being around other dogs eating, sprinting, swimming, humans, barking.
Dislikes: Dogs that growl at her, and the smell of earwax.
Other info: She is 5 and a half weeks pregnant. Untoten, like most dogs, can only see two primary colors, yellow and blue. However, in her dreams, she is able to imagine the color red. Everything in her dreams are highly saturated. Her dreams have always been happy. She imagines herself as being pink.
Gang: They are called the Protes. (The word doesnt mean anything i made it up) They consist of 3 types, watchdogs, hounds, and organizers. The hounds do the hunting, and bring food back for the orginisers and watchdogs. They give Untoten extra food because she's pregnant. Untotens job is simply to gaurd their territory and sometimes go with the hunters to keep lookout.
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Comments: 38

Club-Dreamiverse [2022-07-01 15:06:19 +0000 UTC]

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DannyHorseRules [2012-07-14 03:31:20 +0000 UTC]

Does Untoten have dewclaws?

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CorvusRaven In reply to DannyHorseRules [2012-07-14 04:08:17 +0000 UTC]

I never draw them, so no I geuss not xD

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Storiesofheroes [2012-02-16 02:46:43 +0000 UTC]

congrats on making it to round three!
X3

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CorvusRaven In reply to Storiesofheroes [2012-02-16 04:03:34 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Same to you!! 8D Good luck!

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Storiesofheroes In reply to CorvusRaven [2012-02-16 05:01:33 +0000 UTC]

^^ you too

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HeartinaRosebud [2011-10-04 11:23:28 +0000 UTC]

How many fetuses does Untoten have?

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CorvusRaven In reply to HeartinaRosebud [2011-10-04 15:40:49 +0000 UTC]

2

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HeartinaRosebud In reply to HeartinaRosebud [2011-10-04 11:24:05 +0000 UTC]

I spelt feti wrong; LOL~

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CrookedLynx [2011-09-16 03:21:30 +0000 UTC]

untoten has always been in my top favorite characters. she's unbelievably interesting and she's simply amazing.
your imagination is beyond me, it's absolutely mind blowing!

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CorvusRaven In reply to CrookedLynx [2011-09-16 17:42:15 +0000 UTC]

Aw thank you

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kharmii [2011-07-26 23:20:27 +0000 UTC]

LOL! You've got such a neat imagination, making a character from one of those monkey dogs. Reading these tournaments has been entertaining.

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CorvusRaven In reply to kharmii [2011-07-27 17:05:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, they're a fun breed ^^ Yeah I do enjoy reading all of the entry's.

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KelsieWG [2011-06-18 01:40:07 +0000 UTC]

Cool charcter! 8D you say shes pregnant, does she have a specific mate? 83 if it said I completely ran over it XD

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CorvusRaven In reply to KelsieWG [2011-06-18 20:18:55 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Yeah, her mate is a dog named Jason, who has yet to be shown in the comic.

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KelsieWG In reply to CorvusRaven [2011-06-19 12:12:40 +0000 UTC]

Ahh nice! ;3

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Sukimi123 [2011-05-13 19:29:30 +0000 UTC]

wow~! She really is an interesting charachter, especially with her play dead and partial invisibility. I know some people may find that kinda creepy but I think it's pretty cool! The 'look like zombie' feature interests me as well!

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CorvusRaven In reply to Sukimi123 [2011-05-14 00:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! ^^

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Finion591 [2011-04-11 13:01:52 +0000 UTC]

If I can ask... how large is she..?

And I certainly like her actual simple markings~

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CorvusRaven In reply to Finion591 [2011-04-11 15:35:14 +0000 UTC]

She is 10 pounds, and 7 inches at the shoulder. I probably should add height to the ref xD

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Finion591 In reply to CorvusRaven [2011-04-22 14:54:24 +0000 UTC]

Would be a good idea 8D...

very late reply is late...

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Hucca [2011-04-06 11:24:51 +0000 UTC]

Untoten is one unique character and her ability is amazing! I adore her!

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CorvusRaven In reply to Hucca [2011-04-07 05:29:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Shinkoryu14 [2011-04-04 23:06:43 +0000 UTC]

I never commented on this did I? I apologize, must have slipped through the cracks.

Untoten is an interesting character, although I would expect nothing less from you. Good luck with your audition!

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CorvusRaven In reply to Shinkoryu14 [2011-04-05 16:04:14 +0000 UTC]

Its ok xD
Thank you very much! C:

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ReverendAspen [2011-04-03 03:14:55 +0000 UTC]

It just doesn't end, does it? You just have to keep one-upping yourself in the strange factor. And that's why you're awesome.

Cool story, awesome ability, and that beard... :V

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CorvusRaven In reply to ReverendAspen [2011-04-04 06:26:32 +0000 UTC]

Thanks
I think I'll have fun with this character C:

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HeartinaRosebud [2011-03-28 06:24:08 +0000 UTC]

Click -> [link]

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Songdogx [2011-03-27 16:31:45 +0000 UTC]

"That's a neat trick there Uggles. What's them little things floating around?"

Psh there's no reason to put it in Ukrainian. Also I still want someone to braid her beard.

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CorvusRaven In reply to Songdogx [2011-03-27 16:45:29 +0000 UTC]

It would be more authentic C:

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Songdogx In reply to CorvusRaven [2011-03-27 16:57:55 +0000 UTC]

Yes but this implies that the dogs are literally capable of speaking human language.

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CorvusRaven In reply to Songdogx [2011-03-27 19:16:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah normally dogs can't speak at all, besides barking and growling. We have to assume that dogs are able to speak if we want any dialogue. Unless they're telepathic or something.

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HeartinaRosebud [2011-03-27 12:14:39 +0000 UTC]

Day Sue is gonna give birth to her puppies!!

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dandypandy12 [2011-03-27 09:45:52 +0000 UTC]

i know no one else who would think of a small dog that can make it limbs disapear! just wow! XD

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CorvusRaven In reply to dandypandy12 [2011-03-31 20:26:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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Mongrelistic [2011-03-27 08:13:40 +0000 UTC]

I swear, you always come up with the most awesome ideas for characters. Always so interesting, never anything dull.

I keep seeing a bearded old man when I look at her face. It keeps making me giggle a little.

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CorvusRaven In reply to Mongrelistic [2011-03-28 04:20:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you
Yeah, brussels griffon dogs remind me of gremlins or something xD

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wolfdog127 In reply to CorvusRaven [2011-08-29 08:19:46 +0000 UTC]

XD gremlin dog!

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