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Fistron [2018-05-30 21:10:30 +0000 UTC]

She's pretty.

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blueiceegirlart [2018-05-27 17:34:46 +0000 UTC]

shes very cute
 <3

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CarnoProductions [2018-05-26 04:05:10 +0000 UTC]

William Bloodclaw: *Ripping out someone's guys out*

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DaphneSpooks [2018-05-13 21:08:43 +0000 UTC]

I honestly love how Thorn looks now. She has improved so much from how she looked on Miiverse. I especially like how her outfit resembles wilted rose petals, it contrasts how you'd expect somebody with "Rose" in their name to look. And the acknowledgement of her flaws is pretty cool. Not many bios tend to do that.
If there was anything I would change about Thorn, is how similar her posture is to Galatina's. I actually have an idea, if you're up for changing her. It might seem a little complicated, but it would really bring out the sadder and more dark aspects of her character.
I'd swap her round so that she is facing the right instead of the left, just to make her stand out to Galatina. Then I'd stoop her down and wrap her arms around her, in a representation of her closed-off personality. Body language is everything.
Maybe have her mouth twisted in a grimace, or have a few tears running down her face. Small things like that really help the viewer see how she behaves.

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ElisDead [2018-05-13 19:19:49 +0000 UTC]

I like the color change you gave her. The colors look a lot more pleasant that way

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