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Published: 2015-07-04 07:57:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 9888; Favourites: 297; Downloads: 187
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This one's kind of a mess but I really need to move on from it since i'm tired and it's laaaate bleeeughhCriticism is welcome, please don't be discouraged to speak your mind!
(but i probably won't be able to read it for a couple of days since i'll be gone for 4th of july weekend)
anyways, have a fun firework and enjoy! bbbbbbbbbb
Updated with a few lil' tweaks based off of some of the feedback you guys gave me. thaaank yoou~
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Comments: 14
KnittedPoncho [2015-07-25 03:19:32 +0000 UTC]
aaaa im too late
but i do have something absolutely nitpicky to complain about D:<
it appears her hood is too small to fit on her head properly, which lowers the hoodies' practicality to the level of a mere sweater
...
and yea that's about it since everything else looks neato, bravo u sausage
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fanedfox [2015-07-07 19:12:47 +0000 UTC]
Very nicely done, she is indeed huge. Though I would prefer a little more "weight" on her butt and thighs, but the belly apron is great.
Ned Fox
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Xx-Dusty-Dragon-xX [2015-07-05 22:16:31 +0000 UTC]
That's a lot of sweat.
Summer weather must be hitting her hard.
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nmdb122599 [2015-07-05 19:47:17 +0000 UTC]
I, ah. I'm not much of one for giving criticism since most of what I say can generally be argued against, but, ah. I think it kind of strange that only her tum seems to have sweat on it, and the back of her thigh, looking closer. I just think the face should probably have some sweat onnit as well, but what do I know.
Not as much as I'd like.
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Derpaggedon [2015-07-04 19:41:51 +0000 UTC]
Oh man I absolutely love the coloring on this!
As for criticism, it looks like her arm is bent the wrong way, and her top half seems to be leaning way too far to the left.
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Captainfuckbus [2015-07-04 15:00:02 +0000 UTC]
great work on the coloring on this one! i'm also likin the short hair and glasses on this elf gal :y
and for criticism, only thing i can see is that she's kinda leaning backwards or warped to the left if that makes any sense, gives me a feeling that she's kinda rotated/tilted to the left, transform tools can help fix this in an instant! other than that, it looks really good!
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Butter-Cups [2015-07-04 08:11:51 +0000 UTC]
I'm quite loving that double belly dollop separated by the jacket, as well as her beads of sweat.
As for critizism, her arm seems to bend back a bit too far and her hand is a little jagged.
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BIasty [2015-07-04 08:03:44 +0000 UTC]
shouldn't bathe with your hood on fatty
happy fourth but canada celebrates its Independence 3 days earlier NERD drives off in cool expensive car
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