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Published: 2004-11-23 02:27:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 197; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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UntitledIf I lied to you, would I notice?
My head aches, it’s not your fault
I’m the one to blame
I did it my way, unnoticed by you
I forgot about you
Chasing my own ghosts
Am I wrong? I know
I have no excuse, but why?
The whispers are getting louder
My head aches even harder
I was childish in my emotions
And surely my reactions
I’m sorry for my reaction
Can you forgive me?
Or is everything lost? Down the drain?
Or are the times we had, still a memory
Of good times long forgotten
Hug me, it’s all right
I’m back, me
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Comments: 5
CountElmo [2005-04-26 23:26:33 +0000 UTC]
Thx for your kind words and the dev watch.
I've added you to my msn list.
But I'll post the dutch version nonetheless.
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CountElmo In reply to CountElmo [2005-05-12 20:51:22 +0000 UTC]
Guess I made an error, or maybe I cant find it, or It slipped my notice.
I cant seem to find the original dutch version, if there ever was one.
But then again, I posted some new ones. Enjoy
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Black--Eyed [2005-04-25 20:42:13 +0000 UTC]
It's a really nice poem, brings back many emotions to me. I would love to read the original Dutch one. Maybe if you have some time you could send me a private message or just put it online?
And by the way, thank you so much for the and the favs on 'Incarcerated' & 'I said no'.
We're mutual friends now
-x-
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Black--Eyed [2005-04-25 20:41:24 +0000 UTC]
It's a really nice poem, brings back many emotions to me. I would love to read the original Dutch one. Maybe if you have some time you could send me a private message or just put it online?
And by the way, thank you so much for the and the favs on 'Incarcerated' & 'I said no'.
We're mutual friends now
-x-
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SweeT-AngelkuH [2004-11-23 19:04:07 +0000 UTC]
ooh so pretty i really liked it!
keep up the good work!
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