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counting-vertebrae — Astral
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Published: 2013-11-13 20:30:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1937; Favourites: 74; Downloads: 0
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i'm the seraphicromanticist,
a hallowed body
swallowing galaxies
like i am hellbent on
self-deterioration
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Comments: 31
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THIS POEM ALMOST MAKES SENSE BACKWARDS
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self-deterioration on/
hellbent/ am i like galaxies / swallowing body
hallowed a romanticist/ seraphic
the
i'm astral
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I love reading this. I'm pretty sure I've gone back to this more than a few times already haha
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thank you so much! honestly i get sick of my old works; it's really nice and reassuring to know other people don't haha
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You're very welcome! I would never get sick of your stuff haha
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that means a lot too honestly, haha
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Makes me think of Galactus from Marvel . Except for that self-deterioration part. Galaxies and planets are his diet.
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I love this so much! It gives me this sad, beautiful feeling each time I read it.
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Thanks for all your support. Like my Facebook, follow skynetcreations. Peace and love to all my support.
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You really shouldn't be unhappy with this. 
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Thank you
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Only honesty.
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Thank you so, so much!
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Thank you!
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I really dig it. I hope you dig my work
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ohhh man. i love the wordplay on hallowed/hollowed (even if it wasn't intentional!) - how you are revered but empty at the same time, and that's why you have to deteriorate. wow i love this.
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Thank you so much! I'm glad someone picked up on that; I was worried it was too subtle. Thank you for the favorite as well!
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Your word choice is strong, but the lack of punctuation takes away from the essence of the poem. Other than that, I really like it
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Thank you so much for the feedback!
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thank you! c: 
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